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<Alphago vs. Lee Sedol> 4th match. Today, I was really surprised at the news that Korean professional Go player Lee Sedol won the game against Alphago. Since I didn't expect anything, but Lee's creative 78th move made Alphago get mad(?). Several moves of Alphago followed were not understandable. I mean, human wouldn't make those move because explicitly they made damage(loss). Lee grabbed the oppotunities and got the profit from Alphago's mistakes. The 78th move was very creative that there were no professional Go player who expected it. I think Alphago couldn't find the right solution to it. So Alphago made several undesirable, lossy moves. As I said before, Lee Sedol is a great Korean Go player. His Creative move leaded him to today's victory. I won't forget his smile after the match.

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4th match.

Today, I was really surprised at the news that Korean professional Go player Lee Sedol won the game against Alphago.
Since I didn't expect anything, but Lee's creative 78th move made Alphago angry get mad(?).
Several of Alphago's moves that followed moves of Alphago followed can not be understood not understandable.
I mean, most people human wouldn't make those moves because they made things worse explicitly they made damage(loss).
Lee grabbed the oppotunities and profited got the profit from Alphago's mistakes.
The 78th move was very creative, and that there were no professional Go player who expected it.
I think Alphago couldn't find any solutions the right solution to it. So they Alphago made several bad undesirable, lossy moves.
As I said before, Lee Sedol is a great Korean Go player.
His Creative move lead leaded him to today's victory.
I won't forget his smile after the match.


Very good writing all in all.  I could easily understand your meaning, but feel that the corrections I made make the story sound a little more natural in English.

Keep up the good work!

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You know how to play Go! Second match and Third match were great, too. :)
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Yea such a good game:)

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