this is the life
we as person we need who talk with , who enjoy with . stay a lone is will make us from first minute suggest to kill our self . but stay alone not always worse idea . we need to stay alone for a bit , we need to be deal with our self before we be deal with others . have friend is a hard thing can anyone got it in this time , I think because we aren't have patient when we choose them .and please don't be stupid and choose anyone then quick be friend because soon you are'll not be friend any more .
the life has taught me a lot of things , and some of lessons was too hurt to me but what can I say , this the life. now !! lets back continue what we was talking about (FRIEND ) , there are some points you've put it on order . for instance, this is a human ,s/he have family , isn't only YOU who connect with her/him . some people want find friend who stay with them most of the time and they want a imagination things . but wait a minute dear!! look to your self first , did you have what you try to find it on your friend . let me tell you something : we are HUMAN not ANGEL .
our time isn't only for you , we have work . its another topic thats took most our life , oh work and study , we can't live without it , because easily the fish can't live without water !? , if there is no work ,will there is no money . if there is no money !! how we can provide our self ? there are nothing free in life you have to pay if you wanna keep a live . hey hold on , don't be upset ! do you know !? is the best things on our life are free , what is ? the health , love , family , happiness and time . you can't buy it. not all rich people are happy , okay i deal with you dear , MONEY is nice thing I dreamed to be rich but later what ?! , its to have free things that i mentioned and have money , but hey i told ( this is life ) maybe later its will let you choose between ( happiness and money ) so what'll you choose ?!
In consequently , be careful , its hurt to stay alone without friend . some time you feel jealous when you heard friend's stories , you hope if its happen to you . I don't know !! but sometimes you wish if you don't have friend . the world is strange sometimes .or maybe Im strange person because I say the real things .
note: i wanna improve my writing skills ,I'll be glad if i find who's help me , and thanks :)
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This is life
We as people need someone to talk with, to enjoy with. Staying alone will make us from first minute want to kill ourselves. But staying alone is not always the worse idea. We need to stay alone for a bit, we need to deal with ourselves before we deal with others. Having a friend is a hard thing. Anyone can get one in this time. I think because we aren't patient when we choose them. And please don't be stupid and choose anyone because soon you won't have any friends any more.Life has taught me a lot of things and some of the lessons hurt me but what can I say, this is life. Now, let's continue with what we were talking about, friendship. There are some points we've got to put it in order. For instance, this is a human ,s/he has a family, it isn't only YOU who is connecting with her/him. Some people want to find a friend who will stay with them most of the time and they want imaginary things. But wait a minute dear! Look at yourself first. Did you have what you tried to find in your friend? Let me tell you something: we are HUMANS not ANGELS .
Our time isn't only for you. We have work. It's another topic that takes most our life. Oh work and study, we can't live without them, because how easily can a fish live without water !? If there is no work, there will be no money. If there is no money how we can provide ourselves ? There is nothing free in life. You have to pay if you wanna keep alive. Hey, hold on. Don't be upset! Do you know that the best things in our life are free? What are they? Health, love, family , happiness and time. You can't buy them. Not all rich people are happy. Okay, I will deal with you dear. MONEY is a nice thing. I dream to be rich but later what?! It's to have free things that I mentioned and have money, but hey I told you, this is life. Maybe later it will let you choose between happiness and money. So what'll you choose?!
So, be careful. It hurts to stay alone without a friend. Sometimes you feel jealous when you hear friend's stories. You hope it happens to you. I don't know but sometimes I wish I didn't have friends. The world is strange sometimes. Or maybe I'm a strange person because I say real things.
Note: I want to improve my writing skills, I'll be glad if I find someone who can help me and thanks :)
Hi, Jawaher -
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I enjoyed reading them. I like how you say what's on your mind. Keep writing, please.
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