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Me and me Hi! My name is tit, I'm now 22 years old. I left school 8months ago and I didn't got any job related from my studies.Then I take a class at English centre for three monts suddenly Im really immerse with it, from now on I give up my major and follow English with a dream that become a teacher.Well you know Im really independent, im no longer rely on my parents so I work during the day and learning every evening, I don't have time for fun , all my free time I spent on listen to English song, BBC, movies in English...Talk about color I like red best.My family is very normal, my parents are farmer don't earn lot income from it, my sister study acountant but she got the job as worker , now she got married 9 months ago and she nearly have a baby, my brother is a student he tall , has a black skin, not good at study. Back to me, I work at shoe company, I didn't like my job , there is bad enviroment, people dont have enough conduct conclude administrator , its not related to English, with English may be I can have a good job with hight salary. My gold in this year is speak English proficenly .

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Me and me

Hi! My name is Tit, I'm now 22 years old. I left university 8 months ago and I didn't get a job related to my studies.Then I took a class at English centre for three months,  suddenly I'm really immersed in it, from now on I gave up my major and follow English with the dream that I will become a teacher. Well you know I'm really independent, I no longer rely on my parents so I work during the day and learn every evening, I don't have time for fun, all my free time I spend listening to English songs, BBC, movies in English...Talking about color, I like red best.

My family is very normal, my parents are farmers, they  don't earn lot of income from it, my sister studied accountancy but she got  job as a worker, she got married 9 months ago and she will soon have a baby, my brother is a student he is tall , has dark skin and is  not good at studying.

Back to me, I work at shoe company, I don't like my job , there is bad atmosphere there, people don't have enough good conduct including the administrator, it's not related to English, with English may be I can have a good job with a high salary. My goal  this year is to speak English proficiently.


Hello Tit, 

I think this is  the longest text I have seen you write. In spite of all the corrections it is good. Most of the corrections are spelling mistakes -  learn the pattern 'spend time verb+ing' and make sure that your times agree. We talked about past tenses before.

Best wishes


Bob

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