Thinking about Shenzhen

Having been in Shenzhen , a city tally different from Hangzhou, several days, there is lots of new experence.

>After having been to Shenzhen , which is a city that is totally different from Hangzhou, I have many experiences in the city to remember .

Young as it is, it has a good development whether on economic or culture. Anytime when I wander among the tall buding, I can't help thinking that what if all other cities in China can have boom like this?

> New as it is, it is well developed , and its rich economically and culturally . Whenever I was wandering around in the midst of its tall buildings , I cant help thinking if other Chinese cities are able to have a boom like Shenzhen.

It is true that it seems a little noisy when compared with Hangzhou. But Yet, we can't deny the fact that it is penetrated with high-tech in every corner.?? 

Yet , we can't deny the fact that modernity is seen in every corner of this city/ everywhere in this city .

Yet , we can't deny the fact that modernity is the impression one will get of this city even if one goes to every corner of this city .

Suddently, It soon reminded me of the book I think of a book named "Heaven on the Left, Shenzhen on the Right".

I wish I can be in less trouble here and find my happiness. Fighting! X

I hope I will have less problems and find happiness . > something that is possible to happen

I wish I would have less problems and found happiness > something that is unlikely to happen .

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