I want to tell you about my dream :) Hi! I'm Russian girl. I am 14 y.o. (yeah, I'm so young). I hope that you'll want to speak with me despite my age. Two years ago I became interested in Japan. I

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I want to tell you about my dream :) Hi! I'm Russian girl. I am 14 y.o. (yeah, I'm so young). I hope that you'll want to speak with me despite my age. Two years ago I became interested in Japan. I became to read a lot of books about it, watch Japanese films and anime. I tried to find a book about Japanese history but I cann't do it in Russia. Now I have a lot of magazines about it and some things from Japan :) I think that Japanese people is good. When I think about Japanese I repenset a polite and nice persons. Probably, I don't know about Japan a lot, but I want to learn so I'll glad to communicate with Japanese. I am afraid that I'll not get answer of Japanese. In future I'll want to live in Japan and learn Japanese language. I hope that you can help me in it. Thanks for reading this short text :)

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I Want to Tell You about My Dream :)

Hi! I'm a Russian girl. I am 14 years old (yeah, I'm that young). I hope that you'll want to speak with me despite my age.
Two years ago I became interested in Japan. I became interested in reading books about it, watch Japanese films and anime. I tried to find a book about Japanese history, but I couldn't do it in Russia. Now I have a lot of magazines about it and some souvenirs from Japan :)
I think that Japanese people are good. When I think about the Japanese, I think about polite and nice people. Probably I don't know a lot about Japan, but I want to learn so I'll be glad to communicate with Japanese users. I am afraid that I may not get replies from them.
In the future I want to live in Japan and learn the Japanese language perfectly. I hope that you can help me with it in the meantime. :)

Thanks for reading this short text :)

I want to tell you about my dream :)

Hi! I'm a Russian girl. I am 14 y.o. (yeah, I'm so young). I hope that you'll want to speak with me despite my age.
Two years ago I became interested in Japan. I started to read a lot of books about it, watch Japanese films and anime. I tried to find a book about Japanese history but I couldn't do it in Russia. Now I have a lot of magazines about it and some things from Japan :)
I think that Japanese people are good. When I think about the Japanese I think about nice and polite people. Probably, I don't know a lot about Japan , but I want to learn so I'll glad to communicate with Japanese people. I am afraid that I'll not get an answer from them.
In future I want to live in Japan and learn the Japanese language. I hope that you can help me with it.

Thanks for reading this short text :)

Hello Diana,

A nice text about your dream, there are a lot of people on this site so there is a reasonable chance that you will find someone to tell you about Japan.

Just a few small mistakes in your writing.

Bob

Just wanted to point out that " cann't " isn't a word, use either " cannot " or " can't " The nearest word I can think of to " repenset " is " represent" but that would not be right in your sentence.

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