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I have to wrote a review about a movie, could you check tis for me please? The Theory of everything (2014) The film ''The Theory of everything'' is based on Jane Wilde Hawking's book ''Travelling to infinity: My life with Stephen'' . The film is directed by James Marsh and distributed by Universal Pictures. The film stars Eddie Redmayne as Stephen Hawking and Felicity Jones as his wife, Jane Wilde. The film won the Golden Globe Award for best actor, for Redmayne, and the Best Original Score for Johannson. The film, a biographical romantic drama, is set in 1960s in USA. It is about the scientist Stephen Hawking, a Cambridge student who is looking for an equation to explain universe's origins. Stephen meets Jane at a university party and their romantic relationship begins. One day, after falling, he became aware of having a motor neurone disease. In spite of his disease Stephen carries on his studies, and achieves the celebrity. He and Jane get married and they have three sons, but Stephen's disease get worse, he can't move any muscles and communicates only through his eyes thanks to the color chart. Now Jane needs help and, frequenting the church choir, she find it in Jonathan Hellyer Jones. Stephen understands the feeling between Jane and Jonathan, and he falls in love with Elanie, his nurse. I recommend this film because it is strongly exciting and moving, it gives an important teaching, especially during Stephen's conclusive speech where he affirms “However bad life may seem, there is always something you can do, and succeed at. While there's life, there is hope.”

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I have to write a review about a movie, could you check this for me please?

The Theory of Everything (2014)

*The film ''The Theory of Everything'' is based on Jane Wilde Hawking's book ''Travelling to Infinity: My Life with Stephen'' . The film is directed by James Marsh, and distributed by Universal Pictures.
*The film stars Eddie Redmayne as Stephen Hawking, and Felicity Jones as his wife, Jane Wilde.
*The film won the Golden Globe Award for best actor, for Redmayne, and the Best Original Score for Johannson.

The film, a biographical romantic drama, is set in the 1960s in the USA**. It is about the scientist Stephen Hawking, a Cambridge student who is looking for an equation to explain the origin of the universe's origins. Stephen meets Jane at a university party, and their romantic relationship begins. One day, after falling, he became aware of having a motor neurone disease. In spite of his disease, Stephen carries on with his studies, and becomes a/achieves the celebrity. He and Jane get married, and they have three sons, but Stephen's disease gets worse, he can't move any muscles, and communicates only through his eyes, thanks to the colour chart. Now Jane needs help and, frequenting/going to/attending the church choir, she find it in Jonathan Hellyer Jones. Stephen understands the feeling between Jane and Jonathan, and he falls in love with Elanie, his nurse.

I recommend this film, because it is strongly both very exciting and moving, and it gives/teaches us an important lesson teaching, especially during Stephen's concludingsive speech where he affirms :  “However bad life may seem, there is always something you can do, and succeed at. While there's life, there is hope.”


*try to avoid excessive repetition;  the second time you can replace 'The film' by 'It'

**actually, it's Cambridge in England

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