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rainy days It is raining a lot now. It's been a long time to hear the sound of rain. I love to have relaxing time at home when it rains. The sound of rain makes me feel calm so that I can focus on something more deeply. But today, my lovely rainy day was very strange. Because of the changes of the climate, it rains more like in semitropical regions; it is often unexpected "downpour". In the past, the rain sounded soft and some people even enjoyed walking in the rain. However nowadays, nobody wants to go outside when it rains because then they would become like a poor wet dog in the rain. Besides, the rain sounds like an ongoing war; it seems like a fighting among the sky and the ground. I feel like I've lost my lovely rainy days. I miss them.!

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Rainy Days

It is raining a lot now. It's been a long time to hear since I've heard the sound of rain. I love to have a relaxing time at home when it rains. The sound of rain makes me feel calm so that I can focus on something more deeply. But today, my lovely rainy day was very strange. Because of the changes of the climate climate change, it rains more like in semitropical regions; it is often unexpected "downpour" we often have an unexpected downpour. In the past, the rain sounded soft and some people even enjoyed walking in the rain. However nowadays, nobody wants to go outside when it rains because then they would become like a poor wet dog in the rain. Besides, the rain sounds like an ongoing war; it seems like a fighting among  between the sky and the ground. I feel like I've lost my lovely rainy days. I miss them!


Great job! I really like the image of the sky fighting with the ground! And you got almost all the articles correct! :)

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Rainy days

It is raining a lot now. It's has been a long time to hear  since I have heard the sound of rain. I love to have a relaxing time at home, when it rains. The sound of rain makes me feel calm so that I can focus on something more deeply. But today, my lovely rainy day was very strange because of the changes of in the climate, it rains more like in Southeast Asian countries, it is often unexpected "downpour". In the past, the rain sounded soft and some people even enjoyed walking in the rain, however nowadays nobody wants to go outside when it rains because  then they would become feel like a poor wet dog in the rain besides the rain sounds like a  an ongoing war; it seems like a fighting among  amongst the sky and the ground. I feel like I've lost my lovely rainy days, I miss them.!

Nice piece of writing, I love rainy days in New Zealand when I hear rain I don't hear a war, all I hear is the rain calmly saying  pitter patter.

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