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Something about this week
I finished my level thirteen in my English courses the last Thursday. (You'd say "English course", singular, unless you're at level 13 simultaneously in more than one English course. Note "last Thursday", "next Tuesday", etc., without the definite article.)
I play as a reporter in a TV show and I talked took about natural disasters in the world, especially the last tsunami in Indonesia. (Note "to play" a role, without "as", although you do use it in "I act as the manager while our manager is on sick leave", etc. Note "especially". "Tsunami" isn't capitalized.)
I was shocked when I saw that news. Fortunately here in Mexico we never have had an earthquake of with that magnitude but anybody is immune from of any kind of natural disaster. (Note "news" = noticias. Note "an earthquake of that magnitude". Did you mean "Nobody is completely immune from all natural disasters", i.e., you can't assume you'll always be safe from such events?)
I don't know how many people were injured but I hope they are be in safe. (We don't exactly have the subjunctive in English, but you'd just use the present tense in this case, compared with "espero que estén a salvo" or similar.
Oh! I'm sad now for that. (I'd say "Now I'm sad about that.")
Something about this week
Hello everyone
I finished my level thirteen in my English courses the last Thursday. I played a as a reporter on a TV show and I took spoke about natural disasters in the world, specially the last Tsunami in Indonesia.
I was shocked when I saw that news, fortunately fortunally here in Mexico we have never have had an earthquake of with that magnitude, but nobody anybody is immune to of any kind of natural disaster.
I don't know how many people were injured, but I hope they are be in safe.
Oh! I'm sad about it. naw for that.
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