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Quitting a steady job Sometimes quitting a job will make your future better. The question is if you should quit a good and well-paid job to try something new. We know that a lot of business man started giving up a steady job to start their own business. I think people who do that are very courageous, because it wouldn't be any person to do such thing. I, for example, have a solid and permanent job and sometimes I think I could quit to try something new. I have an itch to live for some time in a foreign country, but my current job doesn't allowed me that. So, should I quit? I don't believe I would do that because I have much to lost if my new career won't go well. On the other hand, I can have a better life if I change. I've read that for some people quitting the previously job was a good choice, but it isn't probably a good deal for everybody. Maybe in the future I will try something new. I love the work I have, but it's not compatible with others things I want to do for my future. I will see what happens...

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Quitting a steady job

Sometimes quitting a job will make your future better. The question is if you should quit a good and well-paid job to try something new. We know that a lot of business men started giving gave* up a steady job to start their own business. I think people who do that are very courageous, because it wouldn't be any person most people wouldn't dare to do such thing. I, for example, have a solid and permanent job and sometimes I think I could quit to try something new. I have an itch to live for some time in a foreign country, but my current job doesn't allowed me to do that. So, should I quit? I don't believe I would do that because I have too much to lose if my new career didn't go well. On the other hand, I can have a better life if I change**. I've read that for some people quitting the previously job was a good choice, but it isn't probably a good deal for everybody. Maybe in the future I will try something new. I love the work I have, but it's not compatible with other things I want to do in the future. I will see what happens...

* I think you would only use "started giving up..." if it was a new trend. For example, "in the early eighties, a lot of businessmen started to give up well-paid jobs and start their own companies" if you were noting a new trend in society that had not existed before.

** This would be more natural as "I could have a better life if I changed jobs" or "...if I made the change"


This is really good. Although I have made some corrections, most of the errors were very slight and subtle. You really have a good grasp of the language, I can see.

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Thank you :)
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Good to write continuously like that. I hope you the best .

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