First day in my new city
I arrived in Brasilia, my new city, today! It was a very busy day because I had to wake up early, go to the airport, ask someone to pick me up at the airport, organize my clothes and things for tomorrow. Tomorrow it's the big day I have been waiting since December. I was nervous but now I am calmer. I feel very sad during the flight and I even cried thinking about my friends and family who stayed in Rio de Janeiro. Today I didn't study very much because I didn't have time. Even so, I read Harry Potter, tried to memorize some new words I have been learning and did my duolingo (French). I am unwilling to go work tomorrow, but I know after some weeks I will feel blissful for have a work and to live in a city that I like.
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Hi Jessica,
I hope you enjoy Brazilia, I studied this city in art history class, it is supposed to be very interesting because it was built so fast! I hope you can feel at home there. I want to visit Brazil one day :).
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First day in my new city
I arrived to Brasilia, my new city, today! It was a very busy day because I had to wake up early, go to the airport, ask someone to pick me up at the airport, organize my clothes and things for tomorrow. Tomorrow is the big day I've been waiting for since December. I was nervous but now I am calm. I felt very sad during the flight and I even cried thinking about my friends and family who stayed in Rio de Janeiro. Today I didn't study very much because I didn't have time. Even so, I read Harry Potter, tried to memorize some new words I have been learning and did my duolingo (French). I am unwilling to go work tomorrow (I am not sure what you mean..), but I know after some weeks I will feel blissful (sounds a little weird, i would probably use blessed instead) to have a job and to live in a city that I like.=) Good job on your writing, I hope you enjoy Brazilia!
-Vanessa
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First day in my new city
I arrived in Brasilia, my new city, today! It was a very busy day because I had to wake up early, go to the airport, ask someone to pick me up at the airport, organize my clothes and things for tomorrow. Tomorrow it's is the big day I have been waiting for since December. I was nervous but now I am calmer. I feel felt very sad during the flight and I even cried thinking about my friends and family who stayed in Rio de Janeiro. Today I didn't study very much because I didn't have time. Even so, I read Harry Potter, tried to memorize some new words I have been learning and did my duolingo (French). I am unwilling to go I don't feel like going to work tomorrow, but I know after some weeks I will feel blissful blessed for have having a work job and to live in a city that I like.Muito bom!
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