My most embarrassing moment Despite the fact it was a lot of years ago, I remember it as if it was yesterday, in fact, it makes me smile yet although when it happened I wished a big holle on the floor

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My most embarrassing moment Despite the fact it was a lot of years ago, I remember it as if it was yesterday, in fact, it makes me smile yet although when it happened I wished a big holle on the floor where I could have hiden myself. It happened to me one day that I decided going for a walk. When I had been walking for an hour more and less, I met a friend who I haven’t seen for a long time. I was delighted speaking with her. She was really talkative, friendly and cheerful, if fact, she told me that I was dressed to kill with my sports clothes and sneakers. Then, I realized that her shape wasn’t as good as it used to be and I notice specially that she had a little big bally. Because of that, I had the great idea of wondering if she was pregnant, but of course she wasn’t. Oh my God! I thought while I felt that my face was completely red. Finally, I tried to apologize, but the more I tried the more embarrassed I felt, I was crying over spilt milk. After that, I have decided that even though someone seems to be pregnant I would never ask for it.

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My most embarrassing moment

Despite the fact it was a many years ago, I remember it as if it was yesterday, in fact, it still makes me smile, although when it happened I wished the ground would have opened and swallowed me up ( idiom :) ).
It happened to me one day when I decided to go for a walk. After I had been walking for an hour or so, I met a friend who I hadn’t seen for a long time. I was delighted to speak to her. She was really talkative, friendly and cheerful. In fact, she told me that I was dressed to kill with my sports clothes and sneakers. Then, I realized that her shape wasn’t as good as it used to be and I noticed especially that she had a bit of a belly. Because of that, I had the great idea of asking if she was pregnant, but of course she wasn’t. Oh my God! I thought while I felt that my face was completely red. Finally, I tried to apologize, but the more I tried the more embarrassed I felt, I was crying over spilt milk.
After that, I have decided that even though someone looks pregnant I would never ask.

My most embarrassing moment

Despite the fact that it was many/[a lot of] years ago, I remember it as if it *was/were yesterday; in fact, it makes me smile, yet although when it happened, I wished that a big holle would open up in on the floor where I could have hidden myself.
It happened to me one day that I had decided to going for a walk. When I had been walking for an hour, more and less, I met a friend whom I haven’t had not seen for a long time. I was delighted to **speaking with her. She was really talkative, friendly and cheerful; if in fact, she told me that I was dressed to kill with my sports clothes and sneakers. Then, I realized that her shape wasn’t as good as it used to be/had been (before), and I noticed especially that she had a little slightly big belly. Because of that, I had the great idea of wondering if she was pregnant, but of course she wasn’t***. Oh my God! I thought, while I felt that my face was/had turned completely red. Finally, I tried to apologize, but the more I tried, the more embarrassed I felt. I was crying over spilt*** milk.
****After that, I have decided that even though someone seems/appears to be pregnant, I will would never/not ask for about it.

*this is one of the rare occasions when grammatically correct English would use the subjunctive form 'were'

** or ' It was delightful speaking with her'

*** this tense is correct ; disregard the correction made by Jayson Petracorta ; 'spilt' is also correct

**** or 'Since then, I have decided . . '

My most embarrassing moment

Despite the fact it was a lot of years ago, I remember it as if it was yesterday, in fact, it makes me smile yet although when it happened I wished a big hole on the floor where I could have hidden myself.
It happened to me one day that I decided to go for a walk. When I had been walking for an hour more and less, I met a friend who I haven’t seen for a long time. I was delighted to speak to her again. She was really talkative, friendly and cheerful, if fact, she told me that I was dressed to kill with my sports clothes and sneakers. Then, I realized that her shape wasn’t as good as it used to be and I notice specially that she had a bigger belly. Because of that, I had an idea that she is pregnant, but of course she isn't. Oh my God! I thought while I felt that my face was completely red. Finally, I tried to apologize, but the more I try the more I get embarrassed I felt, I was crying over spilled milk.

After that, I have decided that even though someone seems to be pregnant I would never ask for it.

Over all this is good work. There's nothing major to be corrected. Yo estoy piensando que me podria ayudar en mi Español tambien?

Gracias de antemano.

Que tenga un buen dia.

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