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Essay about an English-language film club in my college In my college an English-language film club wants to be open and I will help to carry out its organization. So, first of all, I will make some suggestions about it on the road to achieve a great club. The English-language club has to be a club where we can watch many different types of films, such as comedian films, funny films, action films, drama films… but we specially have to watch films that independently of their genre they are helpful to learn English. In terms of meeting days, I think we should meet one day during the week at least, to discuss about the films we want to watch, and other day during the weekend to watch the film all together. Finally, and the most important part, I think we should promote the club putting posters around the college, where people could watch them and decide to sign up to the club. I am sure that with these ideas we will be able to arrange a great English-language film club. It will really succeed.

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Essay about an English-language film club in my college

In my college an English-language film club wants to be open and I will help to carry out its organization. So, first of all, I will make some suggestions about it on the road to achieving a great club. (one other point - you say "the club wants to be open" which does not read correctly - it isn't really the club that wants to be open - who actually wants the club to be open?  You?  Your friends?  People in general?  Perhaps a better way to phrase this sentence is "My college really needs an English language film club and I will help to carry out its organization")

The English-language club has to be a club where we can watch many different types of films, such as comedy films, funny films (same as comedy films), action films, drama films… but we especially have to watch films that, no matter their genre, they are helpful to in learning English.

In terms of meeting days, I think we should meet one day during the week at least, to discuss about the films we want to watch, and another day during the weekend to watch the film all together.

Finally, and the most important part, I think we should promote the club by putting posters around the college, where people could watch see them and decide to sign up to with (or maybe "for")the club.

I am sure that with these ideas we will be able to arrange a great English-language film club. It will really succeed.

 

Good work Juan!  A few very minor wording corrections and some style suggestions.   

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Essay about an English-language film club in my college

In my college an English-language film club wants to be open and I will help to carry out its organization. So, first of all, I will make some suggestions about it on the road to achieving a great club.

The English-language club has to be a club where we can watch many different types of films, such as comedic films, funny films, action films, drama films… but we especially have to watch films that independent of their genre they are helpful to learn English.

In terms of meeting days, I think we should meet one day during the week at least, to discuss about the films we want to watch, and another day during the weekend to watch the film all together.

Finally, and the most important part, I think we should promote the club by putting posters around the college, where people could see them and decide to sign up for the club.

I am sure that with these ideas we will be able to arrange a great English-language film club. It will really succeed.
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That sounds like a good idea! I hope you do well with it!

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