I like taking photos!
I feel like writing in this place so much. I started it yesterday, and I couldn't stop writing more and receiving more advice about writing articles from all you guys.
Today I want to talk something about taking photos.
The day before yesterday, I went to a nice place which is called "NanLuo GuXiang" in Chinese with one of my best friends, and during that journey, I found taking photos had become an important part in my life.
I took some pictures of nice tablets, ads, shops, etc. and of course, pictures of my friend. I don't like taking too much photos of myself, but i'm sure i'm a self-appreciated person! HAHA^_^
Taking photos is a kind of living which represents the feeling of the person who is holding the camera and pressing the shutter without saying anything. One friend said to me, "I could read your personalities when reading your photos." That is definitely ture, and she doesn't want me to copy what others are doing with their cameras to creat my own pictures, because she thinks that would bury my own ideas about things, taking pictures, and my life as well. I believe so!
Yesterday, it was the first time for me to modify my pictures with photoshop, which was really magic! It almost changed the whole feeling of the pictures and reached where I wanted them to be.
I am just a freshman of taking photos and quite a freshman of modifying pictures, but I'd like to learn more while enjoy my life more with taking different photos!
I love it!
Julia
2011-3-22
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I like taking photos!
I feel like writing here so much. I started it yesterday, and I couldn't stop writingToday I want to talk
The day before yesterday, I went to a nice place
I took some pictures of nice tablets, ads, shops, etc. and of course, pictures of my friend. I don't like taking too many photos of myself, but i'm sure i'm a
Taking photos is a kind of living which represents the feelings of the person who is holding the camera and pressing the shutter without saying anything. One friend said to me, "I could read your personality when reading your photos." That is definitely true, and she doesn't want me to copy what others are doing with their cameras to create my own pictures, because she thinks that would bury my own ideas about things, taking pictures, and my life as well. I believe so!
Yesterday, it was the first time
I am just a
I love it!
Julia
2011-3-22
Good job!
- I changed "self-appreciated" to "vain", but "vain" might be a little too harsh. "Self-important" would work too, and it has less harsh connotations.
-Some of the sentences sound a little unnatural, but grammatically they are fine.
- In English we really only use the word "freshman" to describe people in their first year of highschool/college, otherwise we use "beginner".
I like the attached photo and would love to see more pictures of China!
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