Photo Album-Glamour Shots

Yesterday I visited Taipei International Cosmetics Exhibition and bought a personal photo album, which I will be taken put personal photos in, in November or December.
It cost me a lot: about NT$12,800. From over hundreds of photos, I can choose 20 photos for a 12-inches album and receive 28 photo Electronic photo files. Taking pictures outside, 4 Scenes I will include 4 outdoor portraits (2 formal, 2 casual). I would like to have photos of being elegant, sexy, rhyming (?), sweet and so on.
Why do I want to do that? It’s because the skin and body shape of a woman will becomes worse and worse after her she is 30 years old. And it also can decreases my desire to get married. As you know when seeing my friends’ wedding photos I was so envious or what.
So now, all I have to do is to lose weight, practicing work out, and make a good improve my body shape.

Hi Joyce, nice work. Remember that in English we use can less than in Chinese. Or what is a good American style colloquial expression, but it needs to be used as a tag question e.g. Was she jealous or what? It is often used in a humorously boasting way, e.g. when trying on a new pair of sunglasses: “Do I look cool or what?”