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Today , I was reading in my bedroom after lunch.My brother came and had a look at the book on my hands "New book?" "Yeah, a friend gave me it yesterday ." Then , he looked the name of the book and said : "Well, don't go on reading,bcz you can't understand it." I showed the white part of my eyes to him " come on , who said?! So interesting book!"......Ten minutes later , I was playing with Gulu in the living room......Okey,the name of the book is《History of western philosoplay》...OMG,headache...
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About reading
Today , I was reading in my bedroom after lunch.My brother came and had a look at the book in my hands "New book?" "Yeah, a friend gave me it yesterday ." Then, he looked at the name of the book and said : "Well, don't go on reading it because you can't understand it." I showed him the whites of my eyes "Come on , who said?! Such an interesting book!"......Ten minutes later , I was playing with Gulu in the living room......Okay,the name of the book is《The History of Western Philosophy》...OMG,headache...Hello Hannah,
I think it would give me a headache too and it is written in my language!
There are a few corrections - some for style. If you are holding something you say that it is 'in your hands'.
If you are talking about a noun you should use 'such a (an)' + adjective + noun, you use 'so' + adjective.
Best wishes
Bob
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About reading
Today, I was reading in my bedroom after lunch. My brother came and looked at the book on my hands and said "New book?""Yeah, a friend gave me it yesterday ." Then, he looked the name of the book and said : "Well, don't continue reading, because you won't understand it." I rolled my eyes at him " come on, says who?! Such an interesting book!"......Ten minutes later, I was playing with Gulu in the living room......Okay, the name of the book is《History of western philosophy》...OMG, headache...
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