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Everyone should have a dream I think, that everyone should have a dream, because It inspires us to live....Dream is the most secret desire in man...If you reach your goal - you know what happiness is!✨ But dream must to be only useful for you, and for others .... dream should only be kind and do not bring harm to anyone! You can not lie on the couch and just dreaming ...The dream is not achieved simply. You need to be persistent! Good luck to all:-)

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Everyone Should Have a Dream -- (every word in the title should be capitalized except "a," unless it starts the title)

I think (no comma) that everyone should have a dream, because it (lowercase) inspires us to live.... A dream ("dream" needs article "a")  is the most secret desire in man (mankind? Humankind? Just "man" in this context sounds old-fashioned) ... If you reach your goal, you will know what happiness is!✨ (I have a hard time explaining the change here. I don't think the sentence was really wrong grammatically, but the syntax just sounds more natural in English this way.)
But a dream must not (? unsure of meaning) only be useful for you, but for others ....  a dream should only be kind and do not bring harm to anyone! You can not cannot (all one word) lie on the couch and just dreaming ...The A ("The" is a specific dream, "a" means any dream, which fits this context better) dream is not achieved simply. You need to be persistent!
Good luck to all:-)

(Very good! I hope my corrections helped.)

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Everyone should have a dream

I think, that everyone should have a dream, because It inspires us to live....Dream is the most secret desire in man...If you reach your goal - you know what happiness is!✨
But dream must not  be only useful for you, but also for others .... dream should only be kind and do not bring harm to anyone! You can not lie on the couch while just dreaming ...The dream is not achieved simply. You need to be persistent!
Good luck to all:-)

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