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Baking cake~ Today I bake a cake. It's very interesting. When I was a kid, I enjoy baking, too. But at that time, I can't make the cake successfully. Right now, I finally find why I can't succeed. I am so happy now. In the future, I want to make a lot of dessert.

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Baking cake~

Today I baked a cake. It was very interesting (enjoyable?). When I was a kid, I enjoyed baking but at that time then I can't couldn't make cakes very successfully. Right now, I have finally find found out why I can't wasn't succeeding. I am so happy now. In the future, I want to make a lot of desserts.


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Baking cake~

Today I bake baked a cake. It's very interesting. When I was a kid (child), I enjoy enjoyed baking, too. But at that time, I can't make the cake successfully. Right now, I finally find why I can't succeed. I am so happy now. In the future, I want to make a lot of desserts.

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