My first notebook entry on italki
Hello everyone!
My name is Mahmoud, and I want to write in this little post on my motivation to learn English.
First of all, I'm IT Professional and freelancer at the same time, I deal most of time with English native speakers from USA and Canada, which convey to many sessions of conversations. The issue that, everytime I intend to start a conversation, or my partner calls me for a request, I avoid the voice calls and start chat session.
One day, I was watching a conference on how to learn a new language without any difficult, and the Speaker talks about how speaking with native speakers of that language can improve your language and make it easy to learn, and that what italki and similar platforms offer.
Hope I did good in my first entry.
Best Regards.
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My first notebook entry on italki
Hello everyone!My name is Mahmoud, and I want(/ed) to write in this little post about my motivation to learn English.
First of all, I'm an IT Professional and freelancer at the same time, and I deal most of the time with English native speakers from USA and Canada, which convert to many sessions of conversations. The issue is that, everytime I intend to start a conversation, or my partner calls me for a request, I avoid the voice calls and start chat session.
One day, I was watching a conference(/attended a lecture/was attending a conference about) on how to learn a new language without any difficulty, and the Speaker talked about how speaking with native speakers of that language can improve your language and make it easy(/easier) to learn, and that is what italki and similar platforms offer.
Hope I did good in my first entry.
Best Regards.
YOU ROCKED IT, Mahmoud! You did an excellent, excellent job on your first entry!
My only mini-comments are...
-Every English sentence has a verb, unlike Arabic! So make sure you put your "is's" "are's" and so on there!
-Every English noun, except for proper nouns, has an article (also unlike Arabic!) So you have to have an a, an, the, this, that, those, or these before a noun!
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My first notebook entry on italki
Hello everyone!My name is Mahmoud, and I want to write in this little post on ["about" might be more natural] my motivation to learn English.
First of all, I'm an IT Pprofessional and freelancer at the same time. I deal most of time with English native speakers from USA and Canada most of the time, which convey ["amount" or "add up to"] to many sessions of [maybe "opportunities for" would sound more natural] conversations. The issue is that, everytime every time [or perhaps "any time"] I intend to start a conversation, or my partner calls me for a request, I avoid the a voice calls and start a chat session.
One day, I was watching a conference on how to learn a new language without any difficulty, and the Sspeaker talksed about how speaking with native speakers of that language can improve your language [perhaps "fluency," "speech," or "speaking" might fit better here] and make it easy to learn, and how that is what italki and similar platforms have to offer.
Hope I did good in my first entry.
Best Regards.
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Way to go!
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Your English is great! If you help me learn Arabic we could definitely work together!
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