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[TOEFL] A/D Advice from older friends is more valuable than that from friends at the same age. When people are getting older and older, with no question we shall gain some lives experience during the process of time flushing. But I cannot say firmly that younger one’s advice is less valuable than older ones. Primarily, I do not think a suggestion offered by a youth is unacceptable. Because those inexperience and innocent brains always would think more surreal which means maybe above realistic but creative and fresh. Experience during life time makes people used to do low-risk taking, but not go adventure mode. That means we have lost a bunch of opportunities here during our over-thinking period. All the revolution include Renaissance, Industrialization, even pop art, I do not think any of this was keeping the old rule or discipline made it. Furthermore, it is crystal clear that the valuable of advice is depends on how well the person been educated. Therefore, speaking of age, it is just about how long the people had born but nothing else. For example, my drive coach is a middle-aged man, about 45. He is a very crude person who cannot stop smoking, even we four pupils all in the car, and he has very bad temple without any patient to teach us driving lesson. If I got chance I would switch my driving coach immediately without any hesitates. As these sorts of person, no matter how many years they grow or alive, they are always immature and ignorance. Because of that, people who have sensible conscious would never ask advice from these people. However, there is no intention to promote that older friends’ advice are not valuable without any reservations on the basis of its limitations. For instance, they have been though a lot, very possible that they had exact position as you are being though right now. Even they made wrong decisions in their times, that is also will be good tips for you to go the next steps. While from another perspective, none of us is being though the same circumstances, none of person’s experience can be copied. Empiricism sometimes can mislead us to the wrong paths. From what has been discussed above, I would support that advice from older friends is not so valuable to compare to them from friends at same age.

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