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My letter: Round the world trip - Travel competition Dear Mrs Hopkings, I have read the post just a few minuts ago and I was about to cry of hapiness. I am already looking forward to go with your team and have such a fantastic experience. I always have loved travelling, but it will be the first time I do this kind of trip if you give me the chance. I always try to do at least a couple of travels during the year, but as this year I am not workig I have time enough to take part in this fantastic adventure. Due to the fact I have been travelling many years I have learnt so many things which could be usefull for the team during the journey, I am also fit so I can carry out hard routes and I know four languages which is very usefull too. If you count with me for this travel I am sure that you will not regret your deccision. best regards.

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My letter: Round the world trip - Travel competition

Dear Mrs Hopkings,

I have read the post just a few minutes ago and I was about to cry from happiness. I am already looking forward to going with your team and have such a fantastic experience.

I always have loved travelling, but it will be the first time I do this kind of trip if you give me the chance. I always try to do at least a couple of travels trips during the year, but as this year I am not working I have time enough time to take part in this fantastic adventure. Due to the fact I have been travelling for many years I have learnt so many things which could be useful for the team during the journey, I am also fit so I can carry out hard routes and I know four languages which is very useful too.

If you count with me select me for this travel trip I am sure that you will not regret your decision.

best regards.

 

 

Good job Antonio - just a few minor corrections!  Hope you get to go!! 

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Also, check the name - Hopkins is a more common spelling. But I could be wrong!

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