First Journal
hello guys.i'm new on this site.and of course i'd like to improve my english. probably i'll write a notebook about what i was did today or something new that i got .
probably it'll be not longer story lol, becase this's first notebook. to be honest i'm bit shy. so here we go...
feb 13rd, this's saturday. the weather in the morning bit cold because in outside had rainy. as usual getting up and clean my room .then take a shower and after that making a breakfast and prepare for going to bank. i don't have much plans for today just going to bank and back to home to doing my homework. because this's weekend i'd like to stay at home and relaxing. and after all is done i go to there by public transportation .arrived at bank bit quickly didn't got traffic jam. i get in to the bank and waiting about 15 minutes in here and yea all my needs is done. back to home and directly open my book doing my homework. it takes about 4 hours to finished. really tired and take a break for ahwile and had get lunch . then i review my homework to make it clearly right and after all these finished just relaxing.
i think that's it i guess and i need your advice about this notebook all comments are welcome! :). thank you^^
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First Journal
Hello guys. I'm new on this site.and of course I'd like to improve my English. probably i'll I will probably write a notebook about what I was did today or something new that i got.probably it'll it will probably not be a long story lol, because this is my first notebook. To be honest I'm a bit shy. so here we go...
Feb 13rd, This is Saturday. The weather in the morning was a bit cold because in outside had it was raining rainy. As usual getting up I got up and cleaned my room. Then I took a shower, and after that I made a breakfast and prepared (could say got ready) to go to the bank. I didn't have many plans for today, just going to the bank and back to my home to doing my homework. Because it's the weekend I like to stay at home and relaxing. And after all that is done i go to (the bank?) by public transportation. I arrived at the bank a bit (early?) and didn't get into a traffic jam. I went to the bank and waited about 15 minutes there and yeah, all my needs are done. I went back to home and directly opened my book to do doing my homework. It took about 4 hours to finished. I was really tired and took a break for awhile and got lunch . Then, I reviewed my homework to make sure it is right and after all these tasks were finished, I just relaxed.
i think that's it i guess and i need your advice about this notebook all comments are welcome! :). thank you^^
Well done, just make sure to write in the past tense if you're taking about what you did
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First Journal
Hello guys. I'm new on this site and of course i'd like to improve my English. I'll probably write a notebook about what I did today or something new that I got .It will probably not be a long story, because this is the first notebook. To be honest i'm a bit shy.So here we go...
February 13th, this is Saturday. The weather in the morning is a bit cold because it had rained outside. As usual I'm getting up and clean my room, afterwards I took a shower and made breakfast, then finally prepared to go to the bank. I don't have much planned for today, just going to the bank and back home to do my homework. Because it's weekend so I would like to stay at home and relax. After I'm done with everything, I'll travel to the bank with public transportation .Due to arriving at the bank quickly I avoided getting stuck in a traffic jam. After entering the bank I waiting for about 15 minutes before I got everything I needed. back home, I directly opened my book to do my homework. It takes about 4 hours to finished it. I was really tired and so I took a break for a while and had lunch . Then I reviewed my homework to make needed corrections and after finishing I went to relax.
i think that's it i guess and i need your advice about this notebook all comments are welcome! :). thank you^^
Note: Please be mindful when your trying to write something that already happened. In these cases you have to use the past tense. For example : I took my wallet before leaving the house yesterday --> correct
I take my wallet before leaving the house yesterday--> Incorrect.
Also you have to start new sentences with capital letters.
Please try not to start sentences with 'and'
I wish you good luck and a fun learning experience!
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Always use "I" [capital] instead of i
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