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My self-introduction for a job interview (part 2) In addition to my education background and social practice, I also have various hobbies. Doing Yoga and playing the piano have taken up most of my leisure time. Both yoga and piano have the function to help me get inner-peace and relive my pressure. On the one hand, doing Yoga can keep my body in a good shape and relax my body; on the other hand, playing the piano can enlighten my life and relax my mind. These two hobbies can always keep me in a positive mood. Due to the limitation of the time, I’d like to make an end of today’s introduction. Thank you for listening.

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My self-introduction for a job interview (part 2)

In addition to my educational background and social practice, I also have various hobbies. Doing Yoga and playing the piano have taken up most of my leisure time. Both yoga and piano have the function to help me get inner-peace and relieve my pressure. On the one hand, doing Yoga can keep my body in a good shape and relax my body; on the other hand, playing the piano can enlighten my life and relax my mind. These two hobbies can always keep me in a positive mood.
Due to the limitation of the time Due to a lack of time, I’d like to make bring to an end of today’s introduction. Thank you for listening.

1) education = noun e.g. My education is very good. educational = adjective when not referring to a person e.g. e.g. This is a copy of my educational background. educated = adjective when describing a person. e.g. She is very educated. to educate = verb e.g. Teachers educated pupils.

2) "have the function to" is correct but it sounds very strange and, also, you can just miss it out.

3) relive = to live again, relieve = to lessen (there is a longer 'ee' sound in 'relieve' and a shorter 'ee' sound in 'relive')

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My self-introduction for a job interview (part 2)

In addition to my educational background and social practice, I also have various hobbies such as Yoga and playing the piano. These have  taken up most of my free time. Both yoga and piano have the function to help me get inner-peace and relief some pressure/stress.By doing  Yoga I can keep my body in a good shape and it's also good for the relaxation of the body; on the other hand, playing the piano can enlighten my life and relax my mind. These two hobbies can always keep me in a positive mood.
Due to the limitation of the time, I’d like to end today’s introduction. Thank you for listening.

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