Today is carnival
I need to improve my english and I'm going to try writing every day from today.
Today I'm writing about the carnival, my village is fomous for thisbecause there is a wonderful week of parades with impresive customes and a lot of groups of people. Streets are clouded and music is all over, people dance and laugh and if you come you will come back.
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Today is the carnival.
I need to improve my eEnglish and I'm going to try writing every day from today.Today I'm writing about the carnival. My village is fomous famous for this because there is a wonderful week of parades with impresive impressive customes costumes and a lot of groups of a ton of people. Streets are clouded crowded and music is all over. People dance and laugh, and if you come, you will want to come back.
¡Buen trabajo! Solo tienes errores de gramática. ¡Gracias por ser tan inteligente!
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Today Is Carnival
I need to improve my English, so I'm going to try writing something every day starting today.This time I'm writing about the carnival, my village is fomous for this because there is a wonderful week of parades with impresive customes and a lot of dancing people. Streets are crowded and music can be heard everywhere. People dance and laugh and if you visit us once, you will surely come back. :)
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Today is carnival
I need to improve my English and I'm going to try writing every day from today on.Today I'm writing about the carnival, my village is famous for this because there is a wonderful week of parades with impresive customes and a lot of groups of people. Streets are crowded? and music is all over, people dance and laugh and if you come once you will come back again.
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