Hi guys!!
This is my second note. I thought my English was bad but some people tell me that it's not, I'm glad for this.
I'm going to tell you about my day. It was a normal day, I was going to school and take lessons as usual. Sometimes I feel very sleepy because I fall asleep late on the night. Anyway, when I got home I was very hungry, I could eat an elephant :) after my lunch I started my homework : mathematics(please kill me) I don't hate this subject, just I'm not able in. Now I'm here, writing this note. Thank in advance for your corrections, I know thet I have to get better my English, I'm trying to improve as much as possible.
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Hi guys!!
This is my second note. I thought my English was bad but some people tell me that it's not, I'm glad about this.I'm going to tell you about my day. It was a normal day, I went to school and had lessons as usual. Sometimes I felt very sleepy because I fell asleep late last night. Anyway, when I got home I was very hungry, I could eat an elephant :) after my lunch I started my homework : mathematics (please kill me!) I don't hate this subject, just I'm not able to understand it. Now I'm here, writing this note. Thank you in advance for your corrections, I know that I have to get better at English, I'm trying to improve as much as possible.
Hello Dany,
Your writing is not bad at all, but you do need to practise in order to make it better! Try to write a notebook entry every 2-3 days and learn from the corrections and comments that people make.
As your (school) day is finished everything that happened should be in the past tense.
Best wishes
Bob
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