IELTS Letter - 08/02

To Whom It May Concern:

I am writing this reference letter at the request of Bill Sharp who is applying for the International MBA at the London Business School.

I currently serve as IT Quality Manager at O2. I have 16 years of experience in the telecommunications sector.
I have known Bill for two years, time in which during which time he joined my team as an IT Quality Professional. Bill has a transversal (ooh, tricky. Maybe try "cross-sectional," cross-sectorial," or "cross-disciplinary"?) vision of IT management because of the path he has followed from the technical side of IT to the strategic part where he is currently working.

Thus, I have had the opportunity to appreciate his professional growth in the responsibilities that he have has taken. A clear example is when Bill was in charge of the Office of IT Quality Services for a month, a period in which he demonstrated his ability to lead a team of 10 professionals and meet the objectives that were proposed to him.

Every time I have worked directly with Bill I appreciated his ability to analyse complex problems within the IT infrastructure and propose effective solutions. It is also noteworthy his fluency in project management His fluency in project management is also noteworthy, as is his ability to working with interdisciplinary teams of professionals and their his full willingness to perform not only assigned tasks but also to proposeing new options.(<<Is this what you want to say? I did not understand -- do you mean that all three of these things are noteworthy?)
In summary, I believe that Bill has a set of outstanding professional and academic skills along with remarkable personal skills that make him a perfect candidate for the MBA program at London Business School.

If you should need any additional information you can feel free to contact me by email at [email protected] anytime.

IELTS Letter - 08/02

To whom it may concern:

I am writing this reference letter at the request of Bill Sharp who is applying for the International MBA at the London Business School.

I currently serve as IT Quality Manager at O2 and I have 16 years of experience in the telecommunications sector.
I have known Bill for two years, during time in which he joined my team as an IT Quality Professional. Bill has a broad transversal vision of IT management due to because of the path he has followed from the technical side of IT to the strategic post part where he is currently working.

Thus, I have had the opportunity to appreciate his professional growth in the responsibilities that he have taken. A clear example was shown by  his ability to lead a team of 10 professionals and meet the objectives that were proposed to him after when Bill was  being in charge of the Office of IT Quality Services for a month, a period in which he demonstrated.

Every time I have worked directly with Bill I have appreciated his ability to analyse complex problems within the IT infrastructure and propose effective solutions. It is Also noteworthy are his fluency in project management, working with interdisciplinary teams of professionals and their full willingness to perform not only assigned tasks but to proposeing new options.
In summary, I believe that Bill has a set of outstanding professional and academic skills along with remarkable personal skills that make him a perfect candidate for the MBA program at the London Business School.

If you should need any additional information you can feel free to contact me by email at [email protected] anytime.