Super Bowl 50 of NFL
Today is a day of Super Bowl 50. Greetings to all football fans in the world. Surely now they enjoy the game and the most important annual fest of the NFL like me. Today compete The Experience of Peyton Manning vs Young Force of Cam Newton. Denver Broncos vs Carolina Panthers. Who is your favorite?
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Super Bowl 50 of NFL
Today IS Super Bowl 50 (Super Bowl is an event that HAPPENS on a specific date, but it is not a specific day itself). Greetings to all football fans AROUND the world (We are not inside the world but on it; you could also say "worldwide"). Surely now they ARE ENJOYING (here you need to use the correct verb tense. In this case I think it would be best to use the present continuous as the rest of your sentence implies that the action "to enjoy" has not been completed) the game like me, BECAUSE IT IS the most important annual NFL festival (this sentence is fairly complex because you are making an argument. You can message me privately if you'd like to explain further). Today THE GAME IS A COMPETITION BETWEEN the experienced Peyton Manning and the young force of Cam Newton, and the Denver Broncos and the Carolina Panthers (In english every sentence has a subject [the game], a verb [is], and can have an object. herethe rest of the sentence is the object. "experience" and "young" are adjective which describe the players. This is another complex sentence. Very good!). WHICH TEAM OR PLAYER is your favorite ("who" and "that" refer to people, while "which" refers to groups or things, so it is necessary to specify that in your question)?Very good overall!
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Super Bowl 50 of the NFL
Today is the day of Super Bowl 50. Greetings to all football fans in/around the world. Surely now they enjoy the game and the most important annual contest (no repitas "game") of the NFL like me. Today competes The Experience of Peyton Manning vs Young Force of Cam Newton. Denver Broncos vs Carolina Panthers. Who is your favorite?Today the game is about the experience of Peyton Manning vs young force of Cam Newton
"fest" no se usa mucho salvo expresiones particulares:
"Oktoberfest" - fiesta annual se realizado en octubre o septiembre, como tienen los alemanes
"pianofest" - una semana cuando los niños tocan al piano juntos a una escuela
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