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today happened by English /spanish /chinese there was something happened in my city in the ealy morning today that is a strong earthquake shaking the south of Taiwan. i was sleeping like a log at that moment, suddenly, the strong shake woke me up, i run to open the doors and run back to hand my mom to squat . it's the most heavy earquake what i experience ever. Fortunately, my house and my city didn't have disaster, but the city where near my city didn't luck enough , there are several building collapsed,many people injury, even die.tomorrow is Chinese new year ,that's the worse new in the day before new year . -------------------- de la mañana hoy mi ciudad de terremoto. Yo durmiendo en ese momento,de repente ,mi despertarse. feliz,mi familia y mi ciudad no desastre, pero la ciudad cerca mi ciudad no feliz, varias casas se derrumbaron, varias de personas heridas o muerto . Mañana es el Año Nuevo Chino,estas son malas noticias. -------------------- 今天凌晨在我住的城市發生一場大地震。當時我正在熟睡,突然,劇烈的搖晃把我搖醒,我馬上跑去把門都打開,並且拉著我媽蹲低,這是我所經歷過最久,最大的地震。幸運的是,我的家和城市沒有一點災情,但是臨近的城市就沒有那麼幸運,那裡有好幾棟房子倒塌,很多人受傷甚至死亡。明天就要過年了,這是一件很糟的消息

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today happened by English /spanish /chinese

Something happened today (English / Spanish / Chinese)

 

there was something happened in my city in the ealy morning today that is a strong earthquake shaking the south of Taiwan.

A strong earthquake shook the southern part of Taiwan today in the early morning hours.


i was sleeping like a log at that moment, suddenly, the strong shake woke me up, i run to open the doors and run back to hand my mom to squat .

I was sleeping like a log when suddenly a strong shaking woke me up. I ran around opening the doors (?) and then ran to crouch down (<= "squat" is what you do over a toilet) next to my mother.

 

it's the most heavy earquake what i experience ever.

It was the heaviest earthquake I had (OR: have) ever experienced.

 

Fortunately, my house and my city didn't have disaster, but the city where near my city didn't luck enough , there are several building collapsed,many people injury, even die.

Fortunately, my city and my home were spared disaster, but a neighboring city wasn't as lucky. Several buildings collapsed and there were many inuries and even some deaths.

 

tomorrow is Chinese new year ,that's the worse new in the day before new year .

Tomorrow is Chinese New Year. This was bad news on the last day of the year.

 

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There was something that happened in my city in the early morning today, there was a strong earthquake shaking the south of Taiwan. 

I was sleeping like a log at that moment, suddenly, the strong shake woke me up, I ran to open the doors and ran back to (hand my mom to squat) I don't understand this part. It's the strongest earthquake I've ever experienced. Fortunately, my house and my city didn't have a disaster, but the city nearby wasn't as lucky, there are several collapsed buildings, many injured people, and even deaths. Tomorrow is Chinese New Year, that's the worst news in the day before the New Year .
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Estuve durmiendo cuando de repente desperté. (feliz,mi familia y mi ciudad no desastre, pero la ciudad cerca mi ciudad no feliz) Esta parte no tiene sentido. Varias casas se derrumbaron, varias de personas fueron heridas o murieron. Mañana es el Año Nuevo Chino, estas son malas noticias.
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今天凌晨在我住的城市發生一場大地震。當時我正在熟睡,突然,劇烈的搖晃把我搖醒,我馬上跑去把門都打開,並且拉著我媽蹲低,這是我所經歷過最久,最大的地震。幸運的是,我的家和城市沒有一點災情,但是臨近的城市就沒有那麼幸運,那裡有好幾棟房子倒塌,很多人受傷甚至死亡。明天就要過年了,這是一件很糟的消息

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