Translation of a new fragment of a story I'm writting
"Suddenly, I saw her, or at least that seemed to me, I am not sure, but I knew she was going to the platform, so I started to run. That was not possible, what would be Olivia doing at the station? But it was her… Where was she? I walked through the platform. Lots of people were boarding or leaving the train that have just arrived. Where? Where was she? Was she hiding form me? I was sure I had seen her, wasn’t I? Only few people remained in the platform, the train was starting to move, and she wasn’t there… She should have got on. I looked around one last time and got on. I wandered through every car over and over again. Everyone looked so familiar… ¿or I had already seen their faces too many times? I didn’t know, I only knew for sure one thing: Olivia wasn’t in the train. I felt incredibly tired. I sat beside a window and fall asleep."
As allways, I will apreciate any corrections or suggestions to make it sound more natural, good night!
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