Greetings!
Hi! This is my first writting practice, I'm excited.
I've practiced since one month, I think I have an intermediate level, but I need improve it, I want to present the IELTS exam, I must get an 8 in order to get a Visa and go to Canadá, I'm from Colombia, and I have so many expectations and dreams that I'm going to make come true!!!
The motivation that I have to make this effort, are many, first I want to do it because of me, I want to demostrated everybody that I can, I want to live a better cuality of life, have a better health system, and better oportunitties!
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Well done Maryori!! What an excellent first piece of writing - I hope the corrections below help you!
I am luckily enough to live in your beautiful country - which part of Colombia do you live in? I am in Medellin!
Keep your motivation up and you will have fun along the way!
Tom
Greetings!
Hi! This is my first written practice. I'm excited.I've practiced for one month. I think I have an intermediate level, but I need to improve it. I want to take the IELTS exam. I must get an 8 in order to get a Visa and go to Canada. I'm from Colombia, and I have so many expectations and dreams that I'm going to make come true!!!
The motivation that I have I have many motivations to learn English. First, I want to do it because of me, I want to demonstrate to everybody that I can, I want to live a better quality of life, to have a better health system, and better opportunities!
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