My essay: Life is better today than 100 years ago. Do you agree?
Nowadays we have everything we want, transports to go everywhere, mobile phones to keep in contact with friends and relatieves or just water from a tap. Meanwhile a hundred years ago this would have been unbelievable.
In the past people used to have more children, maybe because there was not TV, and they were able to enjoy playing each other, but the problem was that they do not have to many resources to enjoy. Whereas, currently there are less children to play with but their lifes are completily different, they have TVS, computers or tablets. However I already think that was healthier how children used to enjoy before. There is such a big difference about health too. People now are able to life a hundred years, almost the double than then, that means that people have developed better skills in medicine and they have a better life.
on account of the fact I said before, I really think that life now is better and more comfortable than then but I am quite sure that if people who lived 100 years ago could watch us they would be dissagree with so many things we usually do.
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i don't understand that you said "they do not have to many resources to enjoy" on the line 6. do not have to resources? what does it mean?
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I think it depends on how you use what you're having now. We may be more comfortable in our life but it doesn't mean that there is no disadvantage. It always has it's own to side like a coin. If you go further you may see. But anyway, talking of getting information easily. I think life now it better be cause we can have knowledge easier.
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My essay: Life is better today than 100 years ago. Do you agree?
Nowadays we have everything we need, transports to go everywhere, mobile phones to keep in contact with friends and relatieves or just water from a tap. Meanwhile a hundred years ago this would have been unbelievable.In the past people used to have more children, maybe because there was not TV, and they were able to enjoy playing each other, but the problem was that they do not have to many resources to enjoy. Whereas, currently there are less children to play with but their lifes are completily different, they have TVS, computers or tablets. However I already think that was healthier how children used to enjoy before. There is such a big difference about health too. People now are able to life a hundred years, almost the double than then, that means that people have developed better skills in medicine and they have a better life.
on account of the fact I said before, I really think that life now is better and more comfortable than then but I am quite sure that if people who lived 100 years ago could watch us they would be dissagree with so many things we usually do.
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