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A little bird It was once a little bird called Teddy. On a summerday Teddy woke up wanting to do something different. He wanted to fly. He thought of to surprise his mon, who had going to fetch his food. Then he prepared himself to fly. He open his wings and jumped from the tree. Teddy felt the air through his body. He was happy couse he was flying. But wait! Teddy wasn't really flying. He was just falling. But he didn't know it. So when Teddy got on the ground a cat called Bobby caught and eaten him. Goodbye Teddy. Yeah...Yeah,Teddy was dead, but he died happy. ..............The end.............

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A little bird

It There was once a little bird called Teddy. On a summers day Teddy woke up wanting to do something different. He wanted to fly. He thought of to surprising his mom, who had gone  going to fetch his food. Then he prepared himself to fly. He opened his wings and jumped from the tree. Teddy felt the air pass through his body. He was happy because couse he was flying. But wait! Teddy wasn't really flying. He was just falling. But he didn't know it. So when Teddy landed got on the ground a cat called Bobby caught and eaten ate him.
Goodbye Teddy. Yeah...Yeah,Teddy was dead, but he died happy.
..............The end.............

 

Well done!  Can we have a happy story next time?

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A little bird

There was once a little bird called Teddy. On a summer 's day Teddy woke up wanting to do something different. He wanted to fly. He thought of to surprising his mom, who had going gone to fetch his food. Then he prepared himself to fly. He opened his wings and jumped from the tree. Teddy felt the air rush through past his body. He was happy because he was flying. But wait! Teddy wasn't really flying. He was just falling. But he didn't know it. So when Teddy got on the ground a cat called named Bobby caught him, and eaten ate him.
Goodbye Teddy. Yeah...Yeah,Teddy was dead, but he died happy.
..............The end.............
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The important is be happy .

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