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The Snow I'm in the south of China so I hardly see snowing. But this morning when I woke up at 7,I noticed that the view outside my window looks different,it's a white world! The snow outside is not very heavy but it made me really happy.I wish it would be a heavy snow next year.

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The Snow

I'm in the south of China so I hardly see snowing. But this morning when I woke up at 7,I noticed that the view outside my window looks different,it's a white world! The snow outside is not very heavy but it made me really happy.I wish it would be a heavy snow next year.


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The Snow

I'm in the south of China so I hardly see snow. But this morning when I woke up at 7, I noticed that the view outside my window looks different, it's a white world! The snow outside is not very heavy but it made me really happy. I wish it would be a heavy snow next year.


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The Snow

I live in the south of China so I seldom see snow. But this morning when I woke up at seven, I noticed that the view outside my window is different, it's a white world! The snow outside is not very heavy but it made me really happy. I wish for (hope for is equally acceptable) a heavy snow next year.

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The Snow

I'm in I live in the south of China so I hardly ever see snowing. But this morning when I woke up at 7, I noticed that the view outside my window looks looked different, it's a white world! The snow outside is not very heavy but it made me really happy. I wish it would be a heavy snow next year. I hope it will snow more heavily this year

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