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Winter Night Last evening, it was so cold that I was shivering. I live in the north part of China where hasn't heating but is also cold in winter. Then I decided to walk around to get warmer. I wore four clothes included two sweaters and a coat. When I went out I found that everyone was wearing down jacket with scarf and gloves. The following leaf, the chill in the evening air and the people who were wearing the thick coats brought me a special feeling, kind of peace. When I was walking in the sparsely peopled roads, I felt relaxing. Threw away the complicated thoughts, stopped the busy life to touch my inward world. The darkness and quietness made me think of the earth, the universe and humans. Not about science just were some emotional thoughts about human's life. I think sometimes darkness gives people more sense of safety. Light doesn't mean warm. To be honest, life is always tough(or not easy[emoji]). These days some unhappy things happened, I was little upset. But when I walked in the road, I appreciated that I still have the ability ,time and place to walk. I appreciate that I still can enjoy a piece of peace . Life doesn't always has crisp and sparkling days, long pleasant evening and cheery fires. The end of the happy day is not the end of the world. Here is to March! If winter comes can spring be far behind?(Percy Shelley)

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Winter Night

Last evening, it was so cold that I was shivering. I live in the northern part of China where hasn't  there isn't any heating but even though it is also cold in winter. Then I decided to walk around to get warmer. I wore four clothes included layers including two sweaters and a coat. When I went out, I found that everyone was wearing down jackets with scarves and gloves. The following leaf falling leaves, the chill in the evening air and the people who were wearing the thick coats, brought me a special feeling, a kind of peace. When I was walking in the sparsely peopled populated roads, I felt relaxing relaxed. I threw away the my complicated thoughts, stopped the my busy life and looked within myself to touch my inward world. The darkness and quietness made me think of the earth, the universe and humans. Not about science, just were some emotional thoughts about human's life. I think sometimes darkness gives people more a better sense of safety. Light doesn't mean warmth.
To be honest, life is always tough(or not easy[emoji]). These days Recently some unhappy things happened, I was little upset. But when I walked in the road, I appreciated that I still have the ability ,time and place to walk. I appreciate that I still can still enjoy a piece of peace . Life doesn't always has have crisp and sparkling days, long pleasant evenings and cheery fires. The end of the a happy day is not the end of the world. Here is to March!
If winter comes can spring be far behind?(Percy Shelley)
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Winter Night

Last Yesterday evening, it was so cold that I was shivering. I live in the northern part of China, where hasn't there isn't heating in homes, but it is also cold in winter. (Then) I decided to walk around to get warmer. I wore four layers of clothing,es  includinged two sweaters and a coat. When I went out, I found that everyone was wearing a down jacket with scarf and gloves. The following day leaf, the there was a chill in the evening air, and the people who were wearing (the) thick coats brought me a special feeling, a kind of peace. When I was walking in the sparsely peopled/almost empty streets/roads, I felt relaxing.  I had Threw away lost the complicated thoughts, stopped the busy life, to touch my innerward world. The darkness and quietness made me think of the earth, the universe and humanitys, not about science,  just were some emotional thoughts about human's life. I think sometimes darkness gives people more a greater sense of safety. Light doesn't mean warm.

To be honest, life is always tough(or not easy[emoji]). These days some unhappy things have happened, I was a little upset. But when I walked in the road, I appreciated that I still have the ability ,time and place to walk. I appreciate that I can still can enjoy a piece sense of peace . Life doesn't always has have crisp and sparkling days, long pleasant evenings and cheery fires. The end of the happy day is not the end of the world. Here is to March!

"If Winter comes, can Spring be far behind?"  [Ode to the West Wind,  Percy Shelley]

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