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Amazing Weekend Last weekend, my friend and I went to a music festival called Planeta Atlântida. It happens at Atlântida, a beach placed near the one where my parents own a house. It lasted for two days, and I went to both of them. It was just amazing (I also had gone last year, but this one was special), and I had a great time with my friends and my boyfriend getting to go to all the rap shows I wanted to and listen to great Brazilian and foreign artists (like Wiz Khalifa and the band Magic). I hope next year's to be as good as this one's.

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Amazing Weekend

Last weekend, my friend and I went to a music festival called Planeta Atlântida. It happens at Atlântida, a beach placed near the one where my parents own a house. It lasted for two days, and I went to on both days of them. It was just amazing (I also went had gone last year, but this one was special), and I had a great time with my friends and my boyfriend getting to go to all the rap shows I wanted to and listen to great Brazilian and foreign artists (like Wiz Khalifa and the band Magic). I hope next year's to will be as good as this one's.

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Amazing Weekend

Last weekend, my friend and I went to a music festival called Planeta Atlântida. It happens at Atlântida, a beach placed near the one where my parents own a house. It lasted for two days, and I went to both of them. It was just amazing (I also had gone last year, but this one was even more special), and I had a great time with my friends and my boyfriend getting to go to all the rap shows I wanted to go to, and listen to great Brazilian and foreign artists (like Wiz Khalifa and the band Magic). I hope next year's is to be as good as this one's.

Você fez um ótimo trabalho. Parabéns pelo inglês! 

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