Please help with this article, make it more native~ʕ •ᴥ•ʔthank you
Recently there are three inter-city express trains opened from my hometown to where I work. My mom came to visit me today and she told me these new trains' terminal station is the south railway station. I took the metro to pick her. If I knew the terminal station is the old railway station, I'll take the bus. It's more convenient. When I arrived at the south railway station. I checked the timetable but I didn't find that three trains. Because in China, we name the train by starting with a letter that is a indication of its speed. I didn't explain this in a good way. Well, we have K, T, D and G four types normally. K is a short for kuaisu means fast. T is a short for tekuai means posthaste( I look up this word in a dictionary and I don't know whether is right). D is a short for dongche. G is a short for gaotie. All I found on the timetable was the names start with G. And it should start with T. So I asked a person works in the railway station and she told me I should go to the old railway station. I called my mom to tell her about this. She said she thought it would be in the south railway station. You thought?-_-# After I met her in the old railway station, we went to see a movie Kung Fu Panda 3 then. It's a fun movie. I almost wanted to learn some kung fu because it's so cool! hahaha~It's actually pronounced like gong fu in Chinese. I just wish my dad would come to visit me either. But he got some works to do.
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Please help with this article, make it more native~ʕ •ᴥ•ʔthank you
Recently there are three inter-city express trains have opened from my hometown to where I work. My mom came to visit me today and she told me these new trains' terminal station is the south railway station. I took the metro to pick her up. If I had known knew the terminal station is the old railway station, I would have taken the bus. It's more convenient. When I arrived at the south railway station, I checked the timetable but I didn't find those three trains. Because in China, we name the train by starting with a letter that is an indication of its speed. I didn't explain this in a good way. Well, we have K, T, D and G four types normally. K is a short for kuaisu, which means fast. T is a short for tekuai, which means posthaste( I look up this word in a dictionary and I don't know whether is right). D is a short for dongche. G is a short for gaotie. All I found on the timetable was the names starting with G. And it should start with T. So I asked a person who works in the railway station and she told me I should go to the old railway station. I called my mom to tell her about this. She said she thought it would be in the south railway station. You thought?-_-# After I met her in the old railway station, we went to see a movie, Kung Fu Panda 3 then. It's a fun movie. I almost wanted to learn some kung fu because it's so cool! hahaha~It's actually pronounced like gong fu in Chinese. I just wish my dad would come to visit me too either. But he got some works to do.Well-written! One thing to work on is your use of words like "who", "which", "that", etc. These are called "relative pronouns."
Examples:
I like food that is spicy.
I live in Berlin, which is the capital of Germany.
My mom is playing tennis with a friend who she met at university.
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