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The piece of art which emerged from the water. There is a awesome bridge, built in the sixteen century, which stays at the bottom of a reservoir. The bridge is a renaissance piece of civil art built over a roman one . It was submerged when the reservoir was built in 1998. Nowadays, due to the severe drought we are suffering, the bridge has emerged from the water and many people take advantage of this to visit it. I went to visit it last Sunday. It wasn´t easy to find because it is in an old road cut by the water, but I reached to it at the end. What surprised me the most was the perfect condition in which it remained in spite of having been sumerged along almost twenty years.

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The piece of art which emerged from the water.

There is an awesome bridge, built in the sixteenth century, which stays lies at the bottom of a reservoir. The bridge is a piece of Renaissance piece of civil art built over a Roman one. It was submerged when the reservoir was built in 1998. Nowadays, due to the severe drought we are suffering, the bridge has emerged from the water and many people take are taking advantage of this to visit it. I went to visit it last Sunday. It wasn´t easy to find because it is on an old road cut by the water*, but I reached to it at made it to the end. What surprised me the most was the perfect condition in which it has remained in spite of having been submerged along for almost twenty years.

* Not sure what you mean by "cut by the water."  Was the road formed by the water?  Eroded by the water?  Damaged by the water?

This was extremely well written.  I added this correct because there were a lot of little grammar things that someone at your level could benefit from.

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The piece of art which emerged from the water.

There is a awesome bridge built in the sixteen century which stays at the bottom of a reservoir. The bridge is a renaissance piece of civil art built over a roman one . It was submerged when the reservoir was built in 1998. Nowadays, due to the severe drought we are suffering, the bridge has emerged from the water and many people take advantage of this to visit it. I went to visit it last Sunday. It wasn´t easy to find because it is in an old road cut off by the water, but I reached it in the end. What surprised me most was the perfect condition in which it remained in spite of having been submerged for almost twenty years.
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There is a awesome bridge built in the sixteen century which is at the bottom of a reservoir. The bridge is a renaissance piece of civil art built over a Roman one. It was submerged when the reservoir was built in 1998. Nowadays, due to the severe drought we are suffering, the bridge has emerged from the water and many people are taking advantage of this to visit it. I went to visit it last Sunday. It wasn´t easy to find because it is in an old road formed by the water, but I reached to it in the end. What surprised me the most was the perfect condition in which it remained in spite of having been submerged for almost twenty years.


It looks beautiful!

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