Globalization
Globalization is a process during which the world becomes a united system.
The main reason of globalization are scientific and technological progress, world trade, the Internet, mass-media.
There are a lot of pros and cons. The first advantage is international competition. Competition stimulates production, the higher is competition the better quality of manufactured products. Introduction of innovation and modern technology help improve performance.
One of the main reason of globalization is the Internet. The Internet erases distance between countries. We can get to know news from different world part. It is possible enter university and study there remotely. You can get in touch with people from different countries.
English language is international language and spreads worldwide. A lot of people can say that English takin over the world and later everybody will speak English. Obviously, English takes a leader position in the world. However, in my opinion English will not kill others. I consider, it is great that people try to learn English, because if you know English a lot of things become available.
However, together with advantages there are disadvantages. Advantages of globalization cannot spread evenly around the world. Some industrial industry gets a great profit and qualified employees, while others lose competitiveness and are getting unnecessary.
Technologies develop, companies want to hire qualified people, in turn unqualified workers lose jobs.
Globalization effects greatly the environment. Conflicts about minerals we will not avoid. We are on the verge because of deforestation, pollution of the ovens and the seas, inefficient use natural resources. All this can be harmful for humanity and environment.
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Globalization
Globalization is a process during which the world becomes a united system.The main reasons of globalization are scientific and ,technological progress, world trade, the Internet,and mass-media.
There are a lot of pros and cons. The first advantage is international competition. Competition stimulates production, the higher is the competition the better quality of manufactured products. Introduction of innovation and modern technology helps to improve performance.
One of the main reasons of globalization is the Internet. The Internet erases distance between countries. We can get to know news from different parts of the world part. It is possible to enter a university and study there remotely. You can get in touch with people from different countries.
English language is an international language and spreads worldwide. A lot of people can say that English is taking over the world and later soon everybody will be speaking English. Obviously, English takes a leader (leading sounds more appropriate) position in the world. However, in my opinion English will not kill others(destroy other languages). I consider, think it is great that.for people to try to learn English, because if you know English a lot of things become available.
However, together along with the advantages, there are disadvantages. Advantages of globalization cannot spread evenly around the world. Some industrial industry industries gets a great profit and qualified employees, while others lose competitiveness and are getting unnecessaryredundant.
Technologies develop, companies want to hire qualified people, in turn unqualified workers lose jobs.
Globalization eaffects greatly the environment. Conflicts about minerals we will not avoid ( I think it's better to put it this way we will not be able to avoid conflicts on minerals). We are on the verge (you have to specify what "we" are on the verge of, for example verge of destruction, otherwise it's an incomplete sentence) because of deforestation, pollution of the ovens and the seas, inefficient use of natural resources. All this can be harmful for humanity and environment.
Well done and well thought out. I think you are capable of engaging in an intellectual conversation. I agree with what you had to say too.
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Globalization
Globalization is a process during which the world becomes a united system. The main reasons for globalization are scientific and technological progress, world trade, the Internet and mass-media.
There are a lot of pros and cons. The first advantage is international competition. Competition stimulates production, the higher the competition the better the quality of manufactured products. Introduction of innovation and modern technology helps to improve performance.
One of the main reasons for globalization is the Internet. The Internet erases distances between countries. We can get to know news from different parts of the world. It is possible to enter university and study there remotely. You can get in touch with people from different countries.
The English language is an international language and spreads worldwide. A lot of people can say that English is taking over the world and later everybody will speak English. Obviously, English takes a lead position in the world. However, in my opinion English will not kill other languages. I consider, it is great that people try to learn English, because if you know English a lot of things become available.
However, together with the advantages there are disadvantages. The advantages of globalization cannot spread evenly around the world. Some industrial industry gets a great profit and qualified employees, while others lose competitiveness and become unnecessary. Technologies develop, companies want to hire qualified people, in turn unqualified workers lose jobs.
Globalization affects the environment greatly. Conflicts about minerals, we will not avoid. We are on the edge because of deforestation, pollution of the oceans and the seas, inefficient use of natural resources. All this can be harmful for humanity and the environment.
Hello Tanya,
Interesting essay about globalisation, you have covered a lot of good points in a reasonable order.
Be careful with 'affect' and 'effect' - 'affect' is the verb and 'effect' is the noun. There are quite a few problems with article 'the', but this often causes problems for Russian speakers. I have a video which may help you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eerwn1jR_Vs&list=PLIcNItpI5Y7CByenUL965_JYRKIeFp0Ch&index=4
Best wishes
Bob
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