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About me I've always been a dancer since last year: I started my first classical dance lesson when I was very little, about 5 years old but at first I didn't like the idea of take part in a new group. Anyway years after years I understood it was what I wanted to be in a future, a dancer. Unfortunatelly this passion was ruined by school: I study languages at high school, it's a very demanding school and it takes me away a lot of my free time. I was able to follow my passion , go to school and study at the same time, but this situation only lasted till the last year. I realized I was very nervous due to my efforts to do everything in the best way , I was tired and my marks weren't so brilliant as I desired, so I took the decision to stop dancing for some years. It hurted but it was the only way to resolve the situation, unfortunatelly school is on the first place in my life and I needed the necessary time to study as I had 7 hours of lesson a week. Now I'm more relaxed and I don't have to go out from my house running like a crazy to be on time at my dance school. Obviously I need to do something during the week so I joined the gym and I go there when I can, without being stuck by any timetable.

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About me

I've always been a dancer since last year. I started my first classical dance lesson when I was very little. I was about 5 years old. but At first I didn't like the idea of taking part in a new group. Anyway Years after years I understood it was what I wanted to be in a the future; a dancer. Unfortunately, this passion was ruined by school. I study languages at high school, and it's a very demanding school. and It takes me away from a lot of my free time. I was able to follow my passion , go to school and study all at the same time, but this situation only lasted till the last year. I realized I was very nervous due to my efforts to do everything in the best way. I was tired and my marks weren't so as brilliant as I desired, so I took the decision to stop dancing for some years. It hurted, but it was the only way to resolve the situation. Unfortunately, school is on the first place my first priority in my life. and I needed the necessary time to study as I had 7 hours of lessons a week. Now I'm more relaxed and I don't have to go out from  of my house and running like a crazy to be on time at my dance school. Obviously, I need to do something during the week so I joined the gym and I go there when I can(no comma needed here) without being stuck by any timetable.


Keep up the good work and do not let others ever discourage you. 

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About me

I've always been a dancer since last year: I started my first classical dance lesson when I was very little, I was  about 5 years old but at first I didn't like the idea of take taking part in a new group. Anyway years after years I understood it was what I wanted to be in a future, a dancer. Unfortunatelly Unfortunatelythis passion was ruined by school: I study languages at high school, it's a very demanding school and it takes me away a lot of my free time. I was able to follow my passion , go to school and study at the same time, but this situation only lasted till the last year. I realized I was very nervous due to my efforts to do everything in the best way , I was tired and my marks weren't so brilliant as I desired, so I took the decision to stop dancing for some years. It hurted but it was the only way to resolve the situation, unfortunatelly school is on the first place in my life and I needed the necessary time to study as I had 7 hours of lesson a week. Now I'm more relaxed and I don't have to go out from my house running like a crazy to be on time at my dance school. Obviously I need to do something during the week so I joined the gym and I go there when I can, without being stuck by any timetable.




Well done! I have read this text five times and i found few mistakes.

Good Job! 

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About me

I've always been a dancer since last year: I started my first classical dance lesson when I was very little, about 5 years old but at first I didn't like the idea of take part in a new group. Anyway years after years I understood it was what I wanted to be in a future, a dancer. Unfortunatelly this passion was ruined by school: I study languages at high school, it's a very demanding school and it takes me away a lot of my free time. I was able to follow my passion , go to school and study at the same time, but this situation only lasted till the last year. I realized I was very nervous due to my efforts to do everything in the best way , I was tired and my marks weren't so brilliant as I desired, so I took the decision to stop dancing for some years. It hurted but it was the only way to resolve the situation, unfortunatelly school is on the first place in my life and I needed the necessary time to study as I had 7 hours of lesson a week. Now I'm more relaxed and I don't have to go out from my house running like a crazy to be on time at my dance school. Obviously I need to do something during the week so I joined the gym and I go there when I can, without being stuck by any timetable.


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