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Accroding to the 《(The Huffington Post》report in 26th January,nowdays, Robin Dunbar ,the famous psychologist ，and other researchers in Oxford showed a research report about facebook. Accroding the surveythrough 3375 Facebook users in the UK. , they came up a conclusion that , Whether hou many poeple in their Facebook friends, they only interact with four people. this is the same as the research report in the real world，Dunbar announced before. Though tha social media can expend our friends circle in the virtual world, it is not helpful to make more real friends.
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According to an article in 'The Huffington Post' published on 26th January, Robin Dunbar, a famous psychologist, and other researchers in Oxford have written a report on Facebook. According to a survey of 3375 Facebook users in the UK, they came up to a conclusion that, users only interact with four people, regardless of how many people they have as Facebook friends. Though tha social media can expand our circle of friends in the virtual world it is not helpful to make more real friends.
I've made some corrections for you! It's mostly good, some sentences needed to change word order to make sense. I wasn't sure what you meant here, 'this is the same as the research report in the real world，Dunbar announced before.'
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