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(24th January, 2016) I woke up at a quarter to nine. I had a cup of coffee and some sandwiches. Next I looked at the social networks site and I corresponded with my aunt. Then I listened to "Howard Shore" and "Guillaume Dufay" and repeated English gramma. After that I tried to listen an audiobook (in En) and wrote out an unknown words. Later I read Yasunari's book "The Sound of the Mountain" almost all day. In the evening I corresponded with A.P. and threw off download books in e-book. Before bedtime I watched Gavron's film "Suffragette". I went to bed before midnight.

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(24th January, 2016)

I woke up at a quarter to nine. I had a cup of coffee and some sandwiches. Next I looked at the social networks site  (social network sites - but here it would be more natural to mention the actual name, e.g. I checked my Facebook page).and I corresponded  (I chatted with my aunt / reply to my aunt's message) with my aunt. Then I listened to "Howard Shore" and "Guillaume Dufay" and repeated English gramma. (studied some English grammar) After that I tried to listen (to) an audiobook (in En) and wrote out an  (jotted down all) unknown words. Later I read Yasunari's book "The Sound of the Mountain" almost all day. In the evening I corresponded with A.P. and threw off download books in e-book (not really sue what this means) Before bedtime I watched Gavron's film "Suffragette". I went to bed before midnight.

Good job, Ilona. The verb "to correspond" sounds a little too formal here. / Check meaning of "to throw off" carefully. I doesn't seem to make sense in this context. 

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