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27th January Cloudy Got up early as usual, I sent my daughter to school. But in this morning I had another task that was to attend a school breif for upper grade students' parents. When I stepped in the classroom I noticed that only half of parents came and I didn't find anyone I knew. I choosed a seat in the back of the room, which besides windows. The teachers presented in English so that I had to pay more attention. Actually I still missed lots of information out. After the breif, I looked around the classroom, and noticed somthing interesting. The children pasted some pieces of colore paper with their finger pringtings to promise that they will respect the roles of their class. Anyway, it was a nice morning. I knew the teachers and the school life of my daughter more than before. Enjoy your school days, my little girl!

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27th January Cloudy

Got up early as usual, I sent my daughter to school. But (in)*1 this morning I had another task that was to attend a school brief for upper grade students' parents.
When I stepped in the classroom, I noticed that only half of the parents came and I didn't find anyone I knew. I choosedchose a seat in the back of the room(, which was) besides windows. The teachers introduced(/presented) themselves(or: made their speeches) in English,*2 so that I had to pay more attention. Actually I still missed lots of information they told out*3.
After the brief, I looked around the classroom, and noticed something interesting. The children pasted some pieces of colore paper with their finger pringtingsfingerprints to promise that they will respect the rules(?)(/roles) of their class.
Anyway, it was a nice morning. I knew the teachers and the school life of my daughter more than before. Enjoy your school days, my little girl!

 

aaa: correction, aaa: suggestion, aaa(/bbb): aaa is better, (...): can be omited  

 

*1 Usually this "in" is not necessary.

*2 Please note this "," is important here.

*3 I think "miss out" don't have the meaning "fail to hear".


Hello Susie, great job. 

I felt you have a good grounding of English, so you will get better quickly if you keep on training. 

Hope this helps!

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