Corrections · 6
I introduce myself
Hi everyone , i'm so nervous because tomorrow I have an english test and I know I am good at listening and writing but when I need to express my feelings I'm so bad :(But well, now I'm going to introduce myself my name is Paola (it is an "italian" name but i have never listen before in italian girl)* i'm 21 years old , now I'm marketing student , I like playing tennis, it is my favorite sport and i enjoy spending time with my family , friends or doing outdoor activities.
I was born in Monterrey but now I live in a place called Villahermosa
What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)
*Not sure what you mean here.
Two Tips for You!
1. I is always written as a capital letter, e.g. I went shopping, I went to school. May seem like a small thing but very important to remember with English
2. Make sure to write 'an' when the word after starts with a vowel.
e.g. An ordinary day, an unusual book
Best of luck with your test.
Highlight Grammar corrections
Strikethrough Needs to be deleted
Underlined Does not make sense
italicized Editing notes
I'll introduce myself
Hi everyone , i'm so nervous because tomorrow i have an english test and i know i am good at listening and writing but when i need to express how I'm feeling (this can also be written by saying just saying "but when I am speaking") I'm so bad :(
But well, now i am going to introduce myself my name is Paola (it is a "italian" name but i have never listen before in Italian girl) i'm 21 years old , now i'm marketing student , i like play playing tennis it is my favorite sport and i enjoy spending time with my family , friends or do outdoor activities.
I was born in Monterrey but now i live in a place called Villahermosa
What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)
I introduce myself
Hi everyone , i'm so nervous because tomorrow i have an english test and i know i am good in listening and writting but when i need express my feeling im so bad :(But well, now i am going to introduce myself my name is Paola (is a "italian" name but i have never listened before in italian girl) i'm 21 years old , now i'm marketing student , i like playing tennis is my favorite sport and i enjoy spending time with my family , friends or do outdoor activities.
I was born in Monterrey but now i live in a place called Villahermosa
What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)
I introduce myself
Hi everyone, I'm so nervous because tomorrow I have an English test and I know I am good in listening and writing but when I need to express my feeling is so bad :(But well, now I going to introduce myself my name is Paola (is an "Italian" name but I have never listened
I was born in Monterrey but now I live in a place called Villahermosa
What more could I add to my presentation?
Thanks and have a nice day :)
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
