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Hello! One weeks ago, I came to Canberra. It is my first foreign life. I want to learn English. Now I can not do anything. I'm scary into the store. to order things is more scary. So, I need learn to English. Seriously. Fortunately. I could get the job, in Canberra. Peoples are kind. When they are talk me very slowly and easily. Very thankful peoples. Quickly learn English. Joking together and after work I want drink beer with that people. Thank you! Many comments will be grow up me.

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Hello!

One weeks ago1, I came to Canberra. It is my first foreign life. I want to learn English. Now I can not do anything2 (Now there's nothing I can not do) . I'm scary into the store. to order things is more scary. I'm scared to go into the store and to order things is even scarier. So, I need learn to English seriously.

Fortunately , I could get the job in Canberra3 (I got the job in Canberra). Peoples are kind. When they are talking to me they talk very slowly and easily. They are very thankful peoples 4(I'm very thankful to them). Q I want to quickly learn English to be able to J jokeing together and after work I want drink beer with that people them.

Thank you! Many comments will be grow up me help me get better or will expand my english skills.

Note: Good job on writing this just a few mistakes and hope that everything is going the way you want to .

1 one week singular

2 I believe you mean now you are able to do many things so how I corrected is better because the 1st one shows that you can not do something.

3 If you already got the job then it I got the job and if you're thinking about it then you could say I could get
4 If you are thankful to someone then it's best to say like in the brackets.

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Hi Ada rara! Thank you for letting me comment and advice to my notes. I agree that smile is a good thing. I hope your life will be full of smiles. :D
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Hi there, it's nice to here that your first foreign life is better and better, I think talk more posivetly with them, and your English will be a high level in a short time, just be positive and smile more..haha, after all, smile is the most easy lauguage cross the world,,, i am Ada rara

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