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Photographing outside Yesterday I did photograph as a model. But, the weather was a very cold with harsh wind yesterday in Seoul. I did make up and handle my hairstyle well, however, my face and hair were mess by harsh wind. For my frozen face, I didn't concentrate acting face expressions. Despite this hard environment, the photographer and I did finish photographing in a hard way by coming into the near building frequently for melting our body. As soon as finishing this work, we ran to eat the late lunch, Noodles. The noodles heated our body, so I was very happy.

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Photographing outside

Yesterday I was photographed as a model, but the weather was a very cold with harsh wind in Seoul. I did my make up and handled my hairstyle well, however, my face and hair were a mess by the harsh wind. Because of my frozen face, I didn't concentrate on acting facial expressions. Despite this harsh environment, the photographer and I did finish photographing by going into the nearby building frequently to heat our bodies. As soon as we finished this work, we ran to eat a late lunch of noodles. The noodles heated our body, so I was very happy.

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