16.01.22
Before I moved,I live with my grandparents in the top of an old building.I live on the six floor.And I know all the neighbors.Two floor of little sister's home has a double-deck bed(上下床).The big sister on the third floor can paly the violin(小提琴).The four floor's brother is always on the window to look down.When summer comes,everyone after dinner will be out of the shade(乘凉).Adults with Mazar(马扎) to chat with each other.The child is running around.I spend my childhood wonderful summer there.
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16.01.22
Before I moved, I lived with my grandparents in at the top of an old building. I lived on the sixth floor. And I know all the neighbors. Two floors of my little sister's home hasve a double-deck bed. There are bunk beds in two rooms in my little sister's home.(上下床).The big sister on the third floor can paly play the violin(小提琴).The fourth floor's brother is always on at the window to looking down. When summer comes, everyone after dinner will be out of the shade after dinner(乘凉).Adults with Mazar(马扎) to chat with each other. The children is running around. I spentd my wonderful childhood wonderful summers there.
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