A litre of tears - Keep fighting till the end your life!
‘A litre of tears’ that is a Japanese drama film, I spent all day to watch it, ‘A litre of tears’ made me cry! It was powerful.
It based on a true story from the diary of Kitou Aya – A girl who surfferd from a serious deases know as “ degenerative disease” when she was 15 years old.
She can’t walk, she can’t move anymore and she can’t talk, it is incurable! I imagened if I don’t run anymore, it will be terrible!! but she was struggling until she died at the aged of 25.
I learned many meaningfull things from that film : Motivation, Family, Love, Health and the last things is she always says “Thank you”
P.s: I came back today for my school,my Mom called me to know that I’ve arrived safely yet? she always is the first person! Thanks to Mom!
Special thanks to my friend he suggested that film to me ^^ and thanks for the correction!
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A litre of tears - Keep fighting till the end of your life!
‘A litre of tears’, this(/that) is a Japanese drama film,. I spent all day to watch it,. It(/‘A litre of tears’) made me cry! It was powerful.
It is based on a true story from the diary of Kitou Aya – A girl who surffered from a serious of diseases known as “degenerative disease” she got when she was 15 years old.
She can’t walk, she can’t move anymore and she can’t talk, it is incurable! I imageined*1 if I don’tcouldn't*1 run anymore, it willwould*1 be terrible!! But she washad strugglinged until she died at the aged of 25.
I learned many meaningfull things from this(/that) film : Motivation, Family, Love, Health, and the last things is she always says “Thank you”
P.S.: When I came back today forfrom my school, (my)*2 Mom called me to know that I’ved already arrived safely yet?. She is*3 always is the first person! Thanks to Mom!
Special thanks to my friend hewho suggested this(/that) film to me ^^ and thanks for the correction!
aaa: correction, aaa: suggestion, aaa(/bbb): aaa is better, (aaa): better to be omited
*1 The sequence of the tense is needed.
*2 "Mom" usually means "my mon" to the third person.
*3 This is more natural.
It might be presumptuous, but interested in this essay and corrected incidentally.
I read the book of this drama too^^ And hope this correction helps!
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This sounds like a very difficult film to watch - well done for writing about it so well.
2 pieces of advice: Try to write longer sentences but that use connectives. And try to check your spellings.
Good luck - Tom
A litre of tears - Keep fighting 'til the end your life!
‘A litre of tears’ that is a Japanese drama film that I spent all day watching to watch it and it made me cry! It was powerful.It is based on a true story from the diary of Kitou Aya – A girl who suffered from a serious disease known as “ degenerative disease” when she was 15 years old.
She can’t walk, she can’t move anymore and she can’t talk, it is incurable! I imagined if I couldn't run anymore, it would be terrible!! But she was struggling until she died at the aged of 25.
I learned many meaningful things from that film : Motivation, Family, Love, Health and the last things is she always says “Thank you”
P.s: I came back today from my school. My mom called me to make sure that I’d arrived safely. She always is the first person! Thanks to Mom!
Special thanks to my friend he suggested that film to me ^^ and thanks for the correction!
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A Liter of Tears - Keep fighting till the end your life!
‘A litre of tears’ that is a Japanese drama film. I spent all day to watch watching it. A Litre of Tears made me cry! It was powerful.It is based on a true story from the diary of Kitou Aya – A girl who surfferd suffered from a serious deases disease know known as “ degenerative disease” when she was 15 years old.
She can’t walk, and she can’t move anymore and she can’t talk, . it It is incurable! I imagened imagine if I don’t couldn't run anymore, it life will would be terrible!! but However, she was kept struggling until she died at the aged of 25.
I learned many meaningfull meaningful things from that film : Motivation, Family, Love, Health and the last things is she always says-- “Thank you”
P.s: I came back today for to my school, and my Mom called me to know make sure that I’ve arrived safely yet? She always is the first person! Thanks to Mom, thank you!
Special thanks to my friend he who suggested recommended this film to me ^^ and thanks for the correction!
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yep ^^
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Oh hello, I saw this drama too. It was very moving ~
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