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(21st January, 2016) I woke up at nine o'clock. On the street it was snowing. I had some coffee and oatmeal. After breakfast I called my aunt and offered for a walk on the park. We met at 10.30 a.m. In the park wasn't almost people. We fed the ducks and then we were walking the narrow footpath. When I got home I had lunch. After lunch I looked on the social networks sites and I corresponded with I.A. Later I looked photo that sent me aunt and listened to "John Tavener". Then I answered for a message from I.A. which I've long ignored. We agreed to meet. After that I wrote on italki. Until 9 p.m. I looked Litvin's book on the internet and communicate with my mom about an intuition and the mystical signs. Before bedtime I watched Malle's film "Le feu follet". I went to bed before 12:00 p.m.

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(21st January, 2016)

I woke up at nine o'clock. On the street It was snowing. I had some coffee and oatmeal. After breakfast I called my aunt and offered for a walk on the park. We met at 10.30 a.m. There weren't many people In the park wasn't almost people. We fed the ducks and then we were walked along  the narrow footpath. When I got home I had lunch. After lunch I looked at on the social networks sites and I corresponded with I.A. Later I looked  at a photo that my aunt sent me aunt and listened to "John Tavener". Then I answered for a message from I.A. which I've long ignored. We agreed to meet. After that I wrote on italki. Until 9 p.m. I looked at Litvin's book on the Internet and communicated with my mom about an intuition and the mystical signs. Before bedtime I watched Malle's film "Le feu follet". I went to bed before 12:00 p.m/midnight.
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you wrote 10.30 a.m. you use a colon in between the hour and the minutes. For example 10:30 a.m.

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