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montely's notebook entry: Mar 18, 2011 I went HeFei botanical garden with my friend for a walk yesterday. There is a lake around the garden, we have a good time by the lake.When the soft breeze smoth in my hair I feel so good. And there are a lot of plum blossoms.white and red and smell sweat. I cannot believe the plum blossom can be so beautiful in this season. In the garden we both fogort we had some classes and we didnot think it did any matter. So we are happy, relaxed.

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montely's notebook entry: Mar 18, 2011

I went HeFei botanical garden with my friend for a walk yesterday. There is a lake around the garden, we have had a good time by the lake.When the soft breeze blew through my hair I feel felt so good. There are a lot of plum blossoms, white and red and smell sweat. I cannot believe the plum blossoms can be so beautiful in this season. In the garden we both forgot we had some classes and we did not think it mattered. So we were happy, relaxed.

good job, just remember you tenses. 

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