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The film I would like to review is Law Abiding Citizen. It isn’t the last film I've seen but it’s my favourite one.
This awesome film was set in Philadelphia, and it was directed by F. Gary Gray who is a brilliant director. It was directed by F. Gary Gray, a brilliant director. The main stars are Gerard Butler as Clyde Shelton and Jaime Fox who played the part of Nick Rice, two actors whose performances were electrifying. Two actors whose performance was electrifying in that film.

The film is about a frustrated man (Clyde Shelton) who decides to takes his own justice into his own hands due to when a murderer had killed his family. At the beginning, he asks for helping to from the police and lawyers but they don’t do anything. Ten years after the terrible murder, he decides to takes up the revenge. But t This revenge it won't be just be with the K killer, it will be also be with the district and all of the people who have been involved in the case.

I would recommend this film to everybody anyone because it is the cleverest plot that I've ever seen., You c wouldn't be able to guess the ending and I can promise you that it is highly chilling thrilling. It was is dubbed into other languages so you don’t have no excuse for not to watch it.

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- You forgot to add the word 'is' in the first sentence. If you would like to review a film, you have to say what it is that you would like to review.

- This awesome film was set in Philadelphia. It was directed by F. Gary Gray, a brilliant director: You have put this into two separate sentences which, in a way, is correct but when reading it and speaking it, it flows better when these sentences are put together.

- Two actors whose performance was electrifying in that film. Again, two separate sentences were used here which can be put together. When doing this, it is important to use punctuation in order to break it up.

- favorite: there are two different versions of English (British English and American English). You have used the American version of spelling this word. I have amended that to 'favourite' which is the British way of spelling it. I am British and I use British English.

- English is a hard language to learn, especially when there are two different versions. It can be hard for those who are learning English as they don't know what version is correct.

- Despite some errors (and mostly paraphrasing on my part), the standard of written English in this notebook is good so well done!

- I hope you found my feedback constructive and helpful. Keep going with your English, you seem to be learning it very well.

- If you have any questions, please message me.

PLEASE HELP!!

The film I would like to review is Law Abiding Citizen. It isn’t the last film I've seen but it’s my favorite one.
This awesome film was set in Philadelphia. It was directed by F. Gary Gray, a brilliant director. The main stars are Gerard Butler as Clyde Shelton and Jaime Fox played the part of Nick Rice. Their performances were electrifying.

The film is about a frustrated man (Clyde Shelton) who takes justice into his own hands after a murderer had killed his family. At the beginning he asks for help from the police and lawyers but they don’t do anything. Ten years after the terrible murder, he decides to takes up the revenge. But this revenge won't just involve the killer, it will be also with the district and all the people who have been involved in the case.

I would recommend this film to everybody because it is the cleverest plot that I've ever seen, you could never guess the ending and I promise you that it is highly chilling (did you mean thrilling?). It was dubbed into other languages so you don’t have excuse for not to watch it.

Very good, just a few minor things wrong. Keep up the good work!