I want changes

Today, I began thinking differently  to think differently. I began to value actions more than plans. Words and thoughts are beauty beautiful and intelligent. In the crowded of advice, there is wisdom, but doing something makes the a difference. Doing is not as beauty beautiful as ideas are, but it keeps life working. You've got to have actions and work put in place in order to get make a change. Actions don’t need to have perfect ideas.

I’d rather make mistakes and correct them then than avoid mistakes and remain in the old situation.

Feedback:

- Thinking differently or to think differently: you can use either but 'to think differently' makes more sense.

- Beautiful is the word to use when describing something of beauty.

- Punctuation is essential when you are writing as it shows the reader where sentences start and finish, plus using commas (which I have highlighted) and/or semi-colons, can help break down long sentences.

- You've got to have actions and work in order to get (make) a change: Saying that out loud does not make sense, and if you want to make a change, actions do have to be put in place. Sounds confusing, but when you have more practice and exposure to English, you'll be able to understand it better.

- Actions don't need to have the perfection of ideas: Again, saying that out loud does not make sense and sounds quite lengthy. Actions don't need to have perfect ideas is a simpler way to talk

- The use of you've, don't, and I'd: This in English grammar is called 'contraction'. This is where two words are formed into one word. In a contraction, an apostrophe takes the place of the missing letter/s. You have used some examples here such as don't (I do not), you've (you have) and I'd (I would) so well done on this as it can make reading and speaking easier rather than constantly say "I am", "I do not" constantly can be tiresome.

- I'd rather make mistakes and correct them than avoid mistakes and remain the old situation. Again, well done on using the contraction here "I would". The word 'then' means, for example, you will get dressed first and then go have breakfast. The word "than" means you would rather do something than do the other thing. In this instance, you would rather make mistakes and correct them than avoid making mistakes and not resolving them. I highlighted 'remain in the old situation' as I'm not sure what this means or what you mean by this.

- English is a difficult language to learn and there are two different types of English (American English and British English) which can make it even more difficult as we spell some words in different ways (British: realise, American: realize). Well done on trying your English writing and I hope you find my feedback constructive and that it helps you improve your English. If you have any questions, please get in touch and I'll be happy to help.

I want changes

Today, I began thinking differently. I began to value actions more than plans. Words and thoughts are beauty beautiful and intelligent. In the crowded of advices there is wisdom. But doing something makes the difference. Doing is not as beauty beautiful as ideas are but it keeps life working. You've got to have actions and work in order to get make a change. Actions don’t need to have the perfection of ideas.

I’d rather make mistakes and correct them then avoid mistakes and remain in the old situation.